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apodixis January 14 2012, 05:46:36 UTC
So this whole story so far has been absolutely brilliant and perfect. From your descriptions to the way you've written each and every character, I have been so completely pulled in that I read the prologue and all the posted chapters tonight--I couldn't pull myself away. I've read a lot of post-finale fics that address Earth in different, wonderful, ways, but what has made this especially great is that I haven't seen it done exactly like this. There's so much expertly written plot, twists, and things left open that I'm eager to see how they work out. This last chapter was absolutely killer, I had tears in my eyes as I read the final sections because of how well you made me feel what Lee was going through. I think more than Lee doesn't want Kara to go, I don't want her to.

I cannot wait for the conclusion of Act I and then of course, Act II. Thank you for sharing this!

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pennyante January 17 2012, 06:01:51 UTC
Do you know I actually cried writing it? But I'm the softest touch in the world. Insurance commercials have made me cry.

Thank you for this! It's so encouraging (especially from someone who I know is working on finding her feet in this fandom, too, right? I have one of your fics flagged to read when I have an extra, oh, three or four hours of time, and I can't wait).

About to post two more chapters which will probably untie more threads than they tie up, if that makes sense.

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bekahmelby January 24 2012, 02:49:05 UTC
Love this fic! The characterizations and dialogue are spot-on, and the flow is very natural. I can't wait to see where this is going!

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