Hi there! I've read your story and just felt compelled to make a comment on this.
Your dialogue and Kara's inner voice when K/L talk about the night on New Caprica and everything leading up to it is spot on. I haven't yet read an explanation from Kara as to why she left that resonated with me so much. :)
The rest of the story is wonderful too. Congrats on writing such a fine piece.
Re: this chapter!pennyanteFebruary 7 2012, 21:22:57 UTC
Thanks! It's probably been my favorite scene, so far, to write. Took forever.
In canon: that night on Caprica is so, so difficult to explain, isn't it? I love that we're all obsessed with it. I've probably read ten fics that try to deal with it, including my own, and I *still* am not sure I can see to the terrifying bottom of that scene.
So anyway--I take the above as a great compliment. Hopefully will give me a kick in the ass to finally get the next chapter posted tonight.
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But then...they work together like they're one entity
Loved Karl recognizing Sharon
And I don't think Sam is the better man. He doesn't have anywhere near the history or damage that Lee does...
This was fantastic!!!!!!
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Your dialogue and Kara's inner voice when K/L talk about the night on New Caprica and everything leading up to it is spot on. I haven't yet read an explanation from Kara as to why she left that resonated with me so much. :)
The rest of the story is wonderful too. Congrats on writing such a fine piece.
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In canon: that night on Caprica is so, so difficult to explain, isn't it? I love that we're all obsessed with it. I've probably read ten fics that try to deal with it, including my own, and I *still* am not sure I can see to the terrifying bottom of that scene.
So anyway--I take the above as a great compliment. Hopefully will give me a kick in the ass to finally get the next chapter posted tonight.
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