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pennyante

Chapter 17, "The Sevens"

Mar 17, 2012 20:32

Chapter 17: The Sevens
In the Whole World (WIP)
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~5,400
A/N: The first mysteries of Petra-and how Kara fits into it-revealed. It's fun to write Lee when he's figuring out how to play emotional offense. Next chapter should be following soon. (Ugh, I can't believe this one took me so long to post. I need to quit my day job, ( Read more... )

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indigo419 August 20 2013, 02:31:48 UTC

I had a longing for pilots!fic suddenly - this feeling comes upon me from time to time :) - and came upon your epic! Have been making way through the chapters (Ten is especially lovely), but I just wanted to say how much I appreciate you giving this all so, so much thought, and bringing all the threads together in a way that makes sense. As intricate as this is, it shows that you put the pieces together with care, and I sorely missed that in S4's writing. I am even finding myself invested in characters not from the show, like Olivia, and Daniel. :) <3 Bravo!