In the Whole World: Chapter 19, "Orders"

Mar 28, 2012 19:43


Chapter 19: "Orders"
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Some surgery referred to herein--surgery in which a female character has no control of her reproductive organs. Be advised if that's a non-starter for you (in which case, I sympathize--the scene was hard to write).
Word Count: ~2,000
Chapter 19, )

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OK seriously... givsgr8face March 29 2012, 05:10:23 UTC
I meant to comment on the last chapter. What great exposition! The way you're taking elements from canon and forming them into totally new and exciting possibilities is really awesome! It was very interesting to see how you used Daniel as a surrogate donor for Kara, how her father became involved, your inception of Petra. I'm SO in love with this story! You're weaving all these little intricacies into such an epic tapestry, it's completely captured my attention, I want moremoremore! The whole thing about Lee last chapter was my favorite. In fact, other than Lee and Kara's big epic love session when she shows him the house, that was my favorite chapter.

AND super excited you've written enough for more frequent updates! I am a little confused about the opening of this chapter. When did Lee and Kara make contact with Gabriel? Is that coming or did I miss something? I can't wait. I'm so excited to see where you are going with this!

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Re: OK seriously... pennyante March 30 2012, 02:49:02 UTC
Oh, man, big thank you here. This put some real wind in my sails!

Also, don't worry: you didn't miss anything--Lee and Kara have yet to make contact with Gabriel. Bear in mind that the Horn of Cronus has some odd relationship with time (as odd as the Arrow of Apollo's relationship with space).

And please do tell me when things aren't making sense! Some of it's deliberate--mysteries to be solved--but some of it might just be that I'm making y'all infer too much! My editor helps enormously with the writing but hasn't actually seen BSG (I know!)--so clearly I need some backup!

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koolaidmom11 March 30 2012, 02:37:30 UTC
Hey! Just read this. I really like this but I'm a little confused. I assume the first scene was Kara's imprisonment in the hospital on Caprica.

So Lee is going into the Maelstrom to find Kara who is in the past? Or future? And to try to get her back to Galactica? And then he will get back there with her and go to the new settlement?

Is that right???

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pennyante March 30 2012, 02:54:42 UTC
Yep! The first scene was Kara at the hospital. Ovary harvesting = a gruesome business, right? But Leoben wanted to resurrect Daniel, whom Sharon had killed years before, leading to the necessity of shutting down Petra. Since the Sevens were based on Kara's genetic code, her ova were Leoben's way of working out the resurrection.

Lee's going back to the maelstrom. There may be an obstacle or two in his way. As to when in time he might find Kara--I have to use the ol' RAFO!

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koolaidmom11 March 30 2012, 03:00:51 UTC
What's RAFO?

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pennyante March 30 2012, 03:40:01 UTC
It's internet slang for "read and find out!" :)

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