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Chapter 20, "Between Life and Death"

Apr 14, 2012 16:17

Chapter 20, "Between Life and Death"

Word Count: ~2,900
Rating: PG

A/N: Whew. It's a relief to publish this. This chapter explains a lot, I think. Kurt Vonnegut says good fiction doesn't require suspense, just characters you like. I think I might have been keeping too many secrets from y'all! So here are some. Enjoy 'em.

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koolaidmom11 April 14 2012, 22:07:41 UTC

What???? OMG...is Lee going to get some closure with Zak???

That's terrific. I'm still a little confused about all the other stuff but I'm so pschyed about Lee and Zak...

pennyante April 17 2012, 19:46:17 UTC

I've been psyched about this part for so long!

MUST READ ALL THE THINGS!!! givsgr8face April 16 2012, 05:27:21 UTC

Holy smokes some shit just got REAL!

I had to giggle a little at Lee once he goes through the malestrom because I could only imagine him having a Dorothy Gale moment ("I just kept saying 'I want to go home, I want to go home', and they sent me home") when he arrived in the "in between."

Playing with the time travel!! Super exciting, I can't wait to see where this goes!

And look at PapAdama being all snarky and sarcastic even when his life is on the line. I really dislike the colonials right now, I'm so Team Fleet!

I can't wait for the next update, it's been pretty slow in the fandom, I feel like I'm going through withdrawals as if fic was smack!

Re: MUST READ ALL THE THINGS!!! pennyante April 17 2012, 19:45:52 UTC

I love "Team Fleet" and I think we should make tshirts!

It's been super-slow in fandom; I know what's happening on my end is a deluge of work and social life and awesome weather, and maybe that's everyone? I'm hoping this isn't the shape of things to come!

velvety2010 April 19 2012, 01:22:06 UTC

Amazing!!
You are making my head spin. I think I am going to have to reread this whole story when you are done to make sure I got everything. Oh how i would love to see the plan you had when you started writing this! Everything's so crazily intertwined.
Can't wait for the rest.

pennyante April 22 2012, 00:41:12 UTC

Ha! I have a photograph of the dry erase board on which I originally mapped this that I should post, at the end. The time travel thing is literally a black hole in the center of it. Hopefully that won't be true in the plot.

indigo419 August 20 2013, 02:51:53 UTC

Wow - was holding my breath at the end of this chapter! (So funny... I feel like *I'm* time-traveling now, because I'm reading this well over a year after you posted it! :)) Kara plotting to save the Old Man, Lee face-to-face with Zak... you've done a yeoman's job of wrapping up loose ends!