Always London Chapter 3 and Epilogue

Dec 08, 2013 15:59

Title: Always London (fourth and final part of Four Corners of the Western World) Chapter 3 and epilogue
Author: pennypaperbrain
Fandom Sherlock BBC
Betas: Chloe, eldritchhorrors
Rating: NC-17 for chapter 3 and the fic
Warnings for this chapter: explicit romantic BDSM, discussion of bipolar disorder
Pairing: Sherlock/John
Wordcount: 4,120 for chapter 3, 1,254 for the epilogue ( Read more... )

sherlock fic, four corners of the western world, always london

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mazaher December 8 2013, 17:19:29 UTC
This is intense. From your tumblr posts about this chapter I guess you at one point was a bit worried, but now that I read I see your worries were unfounded. Here you managed to keep a continuity between before, after, and after the after, with each moment being as significant and full of that strange mix of life and death as the former one, and the next. The story goes on, but there is indeed a conclusion to what is written of it. I think the conclusion is this: "He let go of absolutes in Piter. He won't seek them again." Not when he has a very real, physically alive John to see, and be seen by.
Now I knowbeyond any possible chemical doubt that you have a permanent source of inspiration flowing inside you, because you wrote Points of Light, and now you wrote Four Corners. To say nothing of the rest. What can I say? The story goes on after the word "end". Thank you!

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pennypaperbrain December 9 2013, 23:44:03 UTC
Thank you also, most faithful reader!

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mazaher December 10 2013, 18:50:36 UTC
It's easy to be faithful to excellence =)

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