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but i'd like to change the last line ...
Dec 21, 2005 15:53
Wouldn't it sound better if the last line said "I believe in them"???
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packy
December 22 2005, 02:06:47 UTC
It would. My haiku turned out as
we blocked all the
interesting technical
tidbits i was i'd
Which would sound better if the last line was "tidbits, so don't look."
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we blocked all the
interesting technical
tidbits i was i'd
Which would sound better if the last line was "tidbits, so don't look."
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