Real LJ Idol: Week 5

[pennywhistle]

**Trigger warning for rodent phobias

Comments

[eternal_ot]

Eww..man! tables turned...gosh! well er done..actually!

[pennywhistle]

Thank you!!

[mamas_minion]

Nice concept, I like how in the end the tables where turned. I was expecting a pied piper or something of that nature.

[pennywhistle]

Oh, thanks! I'm glad it was unexpected.

[slammerkinbabe]

Auuuggh! This reminds me of Stephen King. Well done and I'll be voting for it, but... auuuggh! (You did well to add a trigger warning, I tell you what)

[pennywhistle]

That's funny, because I've been rereading all of his short stories lately!

[slammerkinbabe]

I'm pretty sure I read a short story of his about rats once, and the feel of this definitely evoked the feel of that. (And I love his stuff.)

[adoptedwriter]

Eeeeewwwww! Good story, but eeeeewwwww......AW

[pennywhistle]

Thanks!! Since I'm really trying to work on my horror writing, I'm appreciating all the ewwwws :-)

[roina_arwen]

Oh my. She should have left well enough alone!

[pennywhistle]

Right?!