Need opinions

[pensylvania_joe]

Seriously... I need to know what people think of this. I'm not sure how I feel.

Comments

[pensylvania_joe]

Yeah, I wanted to start it off in a bit of a cliche way. I've become fascinated lately with the idea of taking a cliche and writing it well.

I have no idea where it's going (except that after what I posted he became a thief), but so far it's like writing a D&D game without all that pesky interaction with human beings.

[draggonlaady]

"It is best to start a tale at the beginning. Failing that, it is best to start as soon as possible."

That is a brilliant line. :)

"I was diving for color when the knife cut me." cover?

A wonderful start... is there more? I'd like to read more of him.

[pensylvania_joe]

There actually wasn't anything more, I don't think. But I'm glad you like it.