A terrible sonnet

[pentothepage]

This is incredibly archaic and generally bad poetry, but I felt like writing a sonnet tonight, not like writing good poetry. In my case, there's a difference. I don't do well with forced rhyme schemes. However, it's the first attempt at ANY kind of poetry I've had in a while, so... voici.

Your WreckageYou left my careful home in disarray

Comments

[ecdysiasm]

I dunno, I really dig "My feet radiate echoes."

[raistlinbrown]

Regardless of your opinion of it, I enjoyed the read. You definitely evoke the intended feeling, and it's great to see you back in poetic action.

[raistlinbrown]

(Oh, and also I wanted to say a belated thanks for the birthday greeting. :- ) )