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phantagrae June 24 2010, 15:59:27 UTC
Such an excellent story (all 3 parts!)

Perhaps I should have you outline my Big Bang story. Your Upsidaisium diagram looks more coherent than what I'm currently coming up with...

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penumbra23 June 28 2010, 17:32:02 UTC
Sometimes it helps to put things down on paper, just to force yourself to think in different dimensions, or directions. Sometimes I have to break out of the up-and-down scroll thing and write left-to-right. I don't know; sometimes you just get stuck and have to see it from a different angle.

Good luck on your Big Bang story! I've got my fingers crossed for you.

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Upsidasium theolo June 24 2010, 16:48:51 UTC
Fucking Awesome. You are the bomb.

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Re: Upsidasium penumbra23 June 28 2010, 17:33:22 UTC
Thanks for reading it! I appreciate it.

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underthere12 June 24 2010, 17:06:15 UTC
So I haven't thought of the promise of this story in months and then I woke up this morning and, out of the blue, thought to myself " I wonder if that Upsidaisium story was ever finished?" only to find that you posted it yesterday. It's like I've read so much fanfic lately that I can feel it being added to the internet. Like an X-files obsessed Jedi, I can feel the force getting stronger. I think I need to turn off my computer and go outside now.

Even though I can never fully buy into the idea that they had sex before season 7, it makes a certain amount of sense in this case. They were both in such an "end of the line kind" of place. And how can you not love a story that features the Gunmen and their van.

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penumbra23 June 28 2010, 17:39:30 UTC
It's like you have your ear to the rail of the internets.

Even though I can never fully buy into the idea that they had sex before season 7, it makes a certain amount of sense in this case.

Yes, me too. This is purely a suspension-of-disbelief story. But it certainly was one of their darkest moments, and I've always thought the beginning of Redux cried out for closer scrutiny.

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suorient June 27 2010, 23:05:31 UTC
i've love part three. thank you

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penumbra23 June 28 2010, 17:55:48 UTC
Ha, it's a bit sad for me, because I cribbed Mulder's Grapes of Wrath speech from Jam Tart, but it seemed to work quite well in this context.

Thank you, dear.

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anonymous July 14 2010, 11:44:19 UTC
At first I couldn't believe my eyes seeing this new fanfic posted!
I love it. It feels real and is amazingly romantic. Thank you :)

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hope_sparkles July 31 2010, 04:59:18 UTC
Absolutely beautiful and breathtaking. It took me forever to comment on this because I didn't really know what to say. The best I can say is that it's incredibly deep. It goes to a level that I've always known was there but could never name, and you put words to it. I hope that's not too cryptic, but I really did love it. Thanks for writing it!

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penumbra23 August 2 2010, 23:24:29 UTC
Not too cryptic at all, friend. Thanks for reading, and glad you enjoyed it!

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