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Into the Dark (2/?)

Mar 23, 2011 12:24

Title: Into the Dark (/?)
Author: peonyinblue
Rating: G
Characters: Eleven/Amy, Rory
Genre (entire series): AU post-Vincent and the Doctor, Action/Adventure, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Word Count: 4,162
Summary: Amelia Pond, the girl who waited. Waited for him. And as usual, he let the loneliness get to him and he said she could come, and now her family, her ( Read more... )

Comments 7

deadlybeauty32 March 23 2011, 23:09:47 UTC

Hi.
Soooooo...I pretty much turned into a giggling/flailing mess when Amy was all " ;D why do you have a button setting on your sonic?" Ahhh <33

I really really loved how you personified like Nine & Ten. The whole bit about the 'bottling it up' and then the emotions leaking through. Is imagery the word I want to use? I dunno. Hopefully you get what I'm saying xD

I'm going to eagerly await the next chapter ;) because you've got me sucked into this fic and there is no return!

peonyinblue March 24 2011, 12:50:43 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the Nine/Ten stuff... I'm sort of obsessed with the psychology behind the Doctor, it is fun to write and try and figure him out. And I'm glad I sucked you in! I'm almost done with Ch. 3, so the wait shouldn't be too long :)

captjackspeanut March 24 2011, 00:45:36 UTC

This is so wonderful! The Doctor and Amy feel so natural to me and it's such a pleasure reading them, you do such a great job on characterization.

Can't wait for the next part!

peonyinblue March 24 2011, 12:51:17 UTC

Aw, thanks! I try very hard to write them the way they are "in real life"... well, you know what I mean :) Thanks for reading!

tasty_kate March 28 2011, 03:55:14 UTC

YAYYY!!! An update!! I loved this chapter; I totally didn't see the lighting of NYC coming. So good! Also loved the scene of the Doctor sonicking Amy's buttons and undoing her laces. Whew! Getting a little uncomfortable there, Doctor? :D
Can't wait to read the next chapter!

peonyinblue March 28 2011, 13:15:29 UTC

Hehehee... I loved writing that scene. He's just so darn good at being uncomfortable, and I love how much Amy seems to love that too. Thanks for reading and commenting, I'm really glad you're enjoying it! :-D

lost_4198 August 27 2011, 03:16:47 UTC

This was such an awesome story. I just finished reading both parts. Your writing for the characters is so spot on. I like how you wrote the Doctor's thoughts especially. Also the idea of how he felt in each body, and that he was almost ready to forgive himself and move on. Even though it kind of had not a certain ending, I would still hope at some point the Doctor and Amy would be together, since they are both so epic and fit each other personality wise. Anyways, seriously great fic. Hope to read more from you :D