Por si éramos pocos by Belenuski - Chapter 13 (Part 3)

[lovelyafterglow]

Title: Por si éramos pocos by Belenuski
Rating: R

NB: Sorry for the delay, guys, I just really didn't feel like translating for a while there! But, well, now that I'm out of that funk, here's a new update and hopefully I can get another out soon. ;-) Enjoy!

Comments

[bsofthewest]

You are wonderful! Belenuski is wonderful! Pepa and Silvia are wonderful. Noah is brave and I could read this fic EVERY DAY!

[lovelyafterglow]

You're wonderful, too! Thanks for commenting! ;-)

[reiimy97]

Thank you to Belenuski for this beautiful story and you too for your great effort to translate it.

[lovelyafterglow]

You're quite welcome. :-)

[ur5amaj0r]

Noah then showed up with a straw in her hand and she put one of the little paper balls in her mouth. Using the straw as a blowgun, she shot a ball at her mother.

I totally did this when I was a kid! Annoyed the hell out of my schoolmate who sat in front of me.

Poor Noah! Kudos to Pepa for controlling her anger by not terminating the bad guys with brown and black shoes. And yay for Silvia for coming home in time to feel Iker's kicks. Love the way she toughen up to help Pepa and Noah go through these hard times. It's refreshing to see that she's the caballero to Pepa now.

Hopefully I can get another out soon

I hope so too. ^-^

[lovelyafterglow]

Haha, troublemaker!

Yeah, it's nice to see them switch roles every now and then. Methinks Silvia is going to take her role of Protector very seriously. ;-)

[pepsi2010]

Thanks for keep translation, I appreciate it! How long more is this story??

Looking forward for more.

[lovelyafterglow]

Welcome!

Well, we've gotten through about 2/3s of the story at this point. We've got a whole 'nother third (or 184 pages in Word) to go!

[jodief1]

Thanks so much for taking the time to translate and post! I fear the point in the narrative where P&S break up again (or so I gather, from the prologue) - but it is a very well-written and compelling story.