Fic: Tonight With Words Unspoken (Sam/Jack, NC-17)

Dec 23, 2010 11:49

Title: Tonight With Words Unspoken
Author: Pepper
Fandom(s): Stargate SG-1
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 1791
Featured Character(s): Sam, Daniel
Pairing(s): Moebius Sam/Jack
Summary: Doctor Carter has some time to think after meeting a certain infuriating ex-colonel.
A/N: A companion piece to All To Myself, Alone. Never mind all the fics I'm supposed to ( Read more... )

stargate fic, sam/jack

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holdouttrout December 23 2010, 17:35:45 UTC
I really can't make up my mind whether this was amazingly hot or hilariously funny, so I'm going with both.

Drunk!Geek!Sam may be my new favorite thing. I love her rambling, hastily-edited speech--I could totally see that whole thing.

I should have listened to you. I was rude and thoughtless, and because of that, we may all miss out on the experience of a lifetime.

I LOVE that Imaginary!Jack is apologizing--it says way more about Sam than it does Jack. Hee hee hee. Hee hee.

(Though really, the fact that both she AND Daniel spent the night drinking and ranting about Jack... well, let's just say that I am more than a little amused.)

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pepper_field December 23 2010, 18:41:40 UTC
Hee, thanks! I think geek!Sam is the main reason I love Moebius - and I just had to take another crack at that speech. *g*

it says way more about Sam than it does Jack.

Hee! Totally. She doesn't know him well enough yet to know he'd never apologise that easily.

And, yeah - it was trying to edge towards OT3, I think... or at least Sam/Daniel/imaginary!Jack. *g*

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holdouttrout December 23 2010, 21:48:07 UTC
I think Daniel was edging that way, at least. (You like how I'm creating fanon off your fic???)

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pepper_field December 23 2010, 21:58:38 UTC
*g* Well, Daniel had a couple of words cut, because I didn't want it to be too much 'Daniel makes a pass and Sam misses it'. I think he was about to invite himself in.

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lolmac December 23 2010, 22:11:56 UTC
Squee! *fans self*

Funny how we both ended up up working on fantasy smut at about the same time!

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pepper_field December 23 2010, 22:52:40 UTC
Oh, heh, yes - congratulations on destroying one of the hideous shirts, btw, even if only in someone's imagination. *g*

Thank you! :)

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lolmac December 23 2010, 23:02:33 UTC
Ah, yes, most satisfying.

I started capping "The Mountain of Youth", and noted with pleasure that Mac ditches the jacket (your personal un-favourite) during the opening credits.

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draco_somnians December 23 2010, 23:48:17 UTC
Wow, it's been far too long since I watched Moebius! This version of Jack and Sam are just too cute!

This (and the first part) is hot smut but it's also so funny and adorable. It feels weird to use "adorable" for smut, but they just are!

"It was a shame she wasn't at home, with the vibrator she'd custom-built out of ones that had proven less exciting than they'd looked online, and some bits from her toaster." - ROFL! Brilliant. :)

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julimond1402 December 25 2010, 09:37:00 UTC
Funny smut, me loves it. And LOL at Sam's ingenious vibrator construction. The things you can do with a toaster...;)

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thothmes January 2 2011, 16:00:44 UTC
I'm catching up with what I missed over Christmas.

I love this view of Dork!Sam who is armoring herself to resist Jack and doesn't realize that she has so totally lost already.

Of course she's built herself a custom vibrator. One suspects that our Sam would not have, for the simple reason that she would only have ordered an effective one to begin with.

I love Uncouth!Jack's utter capitulation in her fantasy while still maintaining a Jack-like persona (Oh! I'd tease you more. or I may be imaginary but I'm not dead)

I love Drunken!Geek!Daniel not quite completing the pass, and Sam obliviously shutting him out. It is indeed a different Daniel here if he is for once the pursuer and not the pursued.

Funny, sexy, and all to easy to imagine actually happening in that timeline.

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