Comments | pepper_field: Fic: Back in Eden (SG-1, gen, 3117 words)

pepper_field

Fic: Back in Eden (SG-1, gen, 3117 words)

Jul 02, 2013 21:23

Title: Back in Eden
Author: Pepper
Fandom(s): Stargate SG-1
Rating: G
Wordcount: 3117
Featured Character(s): Sara, Jack
Pairing(s): None
Summary: Trope #45: Turned into animals.
A/N: For holdouttrout, because I luff her. Hope you had a wonderful birthday, sweetie!

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( Sara had grown up with a couple of big dogs, and she'd always found them far less intimidating than the tiny, unpredictable, yappy ones, so when a large, gray wolfhound loped up to her in the park and nuzzled his nose into her hand, she just chuckled and scratched the top of his head, moving her book out of harm's way... )

stargate fic, gen, team, tropes

Comments 16

suzannemarie July 3 2013, 16:22:13 UTC

Awww. Adorable and fun.

pepper_field July 3 2013, 18:35:43 UTC

Hee, thank you! SG-1 are my fun place.

loriel_eris July 3 2013, 20:30:48 UTC

*laughs helplessly*

I really hope Jack tells Sara the truth. Although... Sara already does 'know', so it'd be nicee closure for Sara - finally Jack was willing and able to share some of the 'classified stuff' with her. *g*

aurora_novarum July 4 2013, 00:20:54 UTC

Awwwwww! That was totally adorable. And if the rest of them also have amnesia...oh Jack will have such ammo. Because of course he won't tell them about Sara.

Hee

thothmes July 4 2013, 06:31:36 UTC

How delighted I was to see you posting SG-1 fic! How disgusted I was to know that I would not have time to actually read it the day you posted it!

This was delightfully silly, with lots of lovely little details, like the dog who absolutely would pay lots of attention, just as soon as he was no longer eating (I've dealt with both that dog and that husband), to Sara mischievously wanting to see Jack have to resort to the chiffon robe. Most delightful of all, though, was the way you got the ingrained, warmth, affection, and humor, mixed with the disconcerting and unaccustomed distance of the divorce which keeps Jack and Sara dancing around each other. IMHO, you got that just right.

[sits back on her haunches, and then gets up, circles 3 times around, and flops down, head between outstretched paws, to verrrrry patiently wait for more SG-1 fic]

*puppy eyes*

[slight anticipatory shiver of the tailp.s. I'm betting Hammond now 4 has choke collars of the right size and four green standard issue BDU belts to act as impromptu leashes ( ... )

penknife July 7 2013, 16:49:14 UTC

Aww! So cute.