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ok, i did a hell of alot more for my movie, i added sceens starting with 4 but im posting the whole thing anyway. read and review please. and i still need a title
Concept - A train on the way to dispose of the zombie bodies is carrying zombies that aren’t dead and they attack the 7 people manning the train. More zombies are on the tracks and manage to destroy part of a bridge ahead of the train, and also get onto the train, overwhelming the people on the train. They all are killed except for 2, one of which manages to get off the train before it goes over the wrecked bridge, then is found by zombies and attacked by them. He fights back for a few minutes before being overwhelmed and killed. The other doesn’t make it off the train and the whole train, including about 30 cars that contain dead zombies, goes off the bridge into a ravine and blows up. There is also a river at the bottom of it and parts of zombies float away, possibly infecting the water, which can lead to another movie.
Characters - Marty Butler - human
Bruce Fitzpatrick - human
Christi Glover - human
Elliot Stevenson - human
Scott Wagner - human
Noelani Church - vampire
Lucas Stein - vampire
4 male humans -
Marty Butler is a very well known leader. He was single handedly responsible for the protection of the leaders of the Alliance and on many occasions was the one sole human survivor in many zombie killing, and supply raiding missions. He is known especially for showing up last minute and saving everyone with his shotgun, 2 pistols, and his huge and strong 5 and a half-foot long claymore. He usually always takes the lead when sent out on missions, and tries his hardest to make sure everyone survives. He specializes in weapons and tactics.
Scott Wagner is an explosives expert. He specializes in chemistry, and always has his own personal bag of chemicals on him. He has training with some of the best chemists in the area and can whip up a batch of C4 or napalm in a matter of minutes. He also has a very powerful nose, and can smell almost any scent within 30 yards. He prefers to fight the zombies with small explosive grenades and flamethrowers.
Bruce Fitzpatrick is the brainiac of the group. He has exceptional hacking and engineering abilities and has designed many of the Alliance’s war vehicles. He is often found in the main computer mainframe in the Alliance HQ and works constantly making a satellite-tracking program that will find all the living zombies so that the Alliance may soon be able to quell the ever growing zombie threat. He also has an apprentice, whom is the daughter of one of the Alliance’s main supply of money and support.
Elliot Stevenson is the always-reliable paramedic. He and his crew of doctors have been working to find a cure for the zombie virus. So far they have managed to find a way to slow the spreading of the virus in animal test subjects, but it requires a large enough dosage of super Novocain to completely render the subject paralyzed, and is too expensive to be let out into the public.
1 female human -
Christi Glover is a calm, clever fighter, preferring to plan out her actions then put them into effect rather than just acting on impulse and hoping for the best. She helped with the cleansing of the main Alliance City with a clever sweep of the city. She has fought with the first male human before, and witnessed the great but terrible things he can do when on a rampage. She has taken a great liking to him and is there to keep him calm when he loses it whenever she can be. She has a mother-like presence and can seem to take control of different situations better than a lot of the other leaders out there. She always loves the people she works with, and is usually there to take care of them. But she also has a temper, and many have learned the hard way, most who know her are afraid to piss her off.
1 male vampire -
Lucas Stein is the mechanic of the group, preferring to sleep near the closest machine than near other humans or vampires. He is often seen as anti social and scared, but on more than one occasion his ‘6th sense’ in being able to fix things has saved many people. He is usually always fixing things and has personally helped design and construct many of the Alliance’s war vehicles. He is a very loyal vampire, and can mostly be counted on to get things done.
1 female vampire -
Noelani Church is a deadly assassin, always wearing a silver colored body suit, and wearing her deadly and infamous knife gloves; biker type gloves with very thin, but extremely strong blades that can cut through nearly anything. She also carries on her back, a crossbow, and along with the arrows, some instant killing poison tipped darts. She prefers to work alone, but is well coordinated with the others if necessary, always hanging back out of sight and using her trusty and dead accurate sniper rifle to take out her foes. She doesn’t have much of a sense of humor and distrusts most humans.
Scene 1 - Two men, Marty Butler, and Scott Wagner, walk up to a very long train in a station, behind them we see a very large looking city with about 20 foot high walls and electric fences running all around it. A guard hands them an envelope. Scott opens it, reads the papers inside, hands it to Marty, and walks towards one of the train cars. Marty, after reading the papers from the envelope, walks over to a small convenience store that’s part of the station. He grabs a few beers and a newspaper and walks over to the counter. “What’s the Alliance making you do today Marty (Butler)?” asks the man behind the counter. He is an older man, balding slightly, wearing a hat, and has a small beer belly. “Disposal work again.” He replied, “You’d think they’d pick someone with less of a record to do this, I mean, after all I’ve done for them, and it’s practically my doing that keeps them alive.” He sighs. “It happens to the best of us man” says the man behind the counter. Here’s your change, good luck.” “Keep it,” says Marty, “See you later. Maybe…” Marty walks out of the store and picks up a bag. He pulls out a shotgun that he slings over his back, and 2 pistols that he slips in his belt.
Meanwhile in the train, Christi Glover, and Noelani Church are doing check ups in the much modified train engine. Scott walks into the room and Christi looks up at him, Noelani not looking up from her work. He puts out his hand, “Scott Wag-” “We know who you are” interrupts Noelani quietly, still not looking up. Scott walks over to her, “so who else are we-” “Bruce Fitzpatrick, Elliot Stevenson, Lucas Stein. I know you already know Marty, I saw you walking up with him. That’s Christi Glover, whom I presume you already know based on your record, and I’m Noelani Church.” “Well you seem to be on top of things” sarcastically replies Scott. “It’s my job to know everything” replies Noelani. Scott shrugs and walk out the back of the engine room towards the living quarters.
Scene 2 - Everyone is sitting around a small table in one of the train cars except for Lucas who is off taking care of the engine. There are maps, and blueprints, and equipment all over the room. The train is moving. There are maps on the table and a folder that says in big red letters “TOP SECRET.” Marty opens the folder and reads it. He becomes wide eyed and drops the folder on the table. “Well men, and ladies, and vampires, this isn’t a usual dump mission. The Alliance is making the dump only a side mission; clearly you’ve noticed the strangely constructed group that we have here…” Lucas suddenly enters the room, putting something in his pocket; he walks towards the table and sits down near Noelani who is sitting at the corner of the table sharpening her hand blades. “Everything’s running smoothly up front” says Lucas “we hit a spot of flat track so I put her on auto.” “Good, now like I was saying, this is a pretty impressive looking group just for dump duty. But apparently that’s just a side mission. The Alliance wants us to go ‘infiltrate’ a base of ours that apparently has been threatening a rebellion. We have all the info about the base on the walls. Were meant to be undiscovered but its highly possible they already know were coming.” They all leave the room.
In the very back of the train, the cars filled with the dead zombies, a zombie suddenly bursts out of the bottom of the pile, he has a gash down his side and is bleeding from his mouth. He is wearing a striped shirt that is in shreds and he is completely covered in blood. Slowly he looks around the car to see all the other dead bodies. He roars, which stirs up other parts of the pile. Outside the car, the train is moving on the tracks, there are fields all around and a mountain range up ahead, the moans and yells of zombies can be heard coming from inside the train cars as it speeds towards the mountain. The sun is slowly setting behind the mountain, and a trail of smoke from the engine can be seen very far up ahead.
Scene 3- Marty is in his sleeping compartment checking and cleaning his weapons and ammo. A knock is heard at the door and without looking up from his guns he tells them to enter. Christi walks in the door and closes it behind her. She sits down in a chair opposite to Marty. He looks up and stares at her for a moment before pulling out his claymore to sharpen it. “I already know Christy, it’s a trap, a suicidal trap. If they wanted to quell a rebellion they could have sent in anyone, air strike, bombing, or just go in there with a few thousand and blow the hell out of them. But no, they sent us…” Christy looks only slightly relived to hear that he already knows but still looks worried. “You can’t do this Marty, I know how you get when forced to do something as unpleasant as kill another human being!” cries Christy. Marty slams his gun down on the table in front of him and coldly says “You think there’s something wrong with me Chris?” He gets up. “You don’t know the half of it! I sweared after we formed the Alliance to never kill another human being, and now I have to go kill hundreds of them!” “Then don’t do-“ “I don’t have a choice damnit!” Both are quiet. Marty is staring out the window, and Christy is in the same seat, a few tears rolling down her face. She gets up and pauses at the door. “I’m sorry….” She whispers before opening the door and walking out of the compartment.
Scene 4 - There is a deserted highway with a dark gloomy looking city in the background, a hanging sign that says Hammer Ford, Exit 2 Miles is swinging. A sudden gust of wind picks up dust, dirt, and papers, and blows them around a bit. The city, bird’s eye view. There are the walls surrounding the city on 2 sides. 2 rivers protect the other 2 sides of the city but there are still walls, only shorter then the others, on the banks of the river. It’s a very dark looking city, the few still standing buildings that over look everything else are gray and ashy looking. There are a few lights on, but the city mostly remains dark. There aren’t many people in the streets. A few cars here and there, but for the most part its all empty. Faces occasionally look out of doors, windows, and roofs. There is a building that has the most lights on that is down a really long and wide street with much smaller buildings on the sides of the street. The building is light up slightly and the sky is a dark ashy color from all of the fires and explosion.
There’s a big room with a long dark red oak business meeting table in the middle of the room with bright lights hanging room the ceiling over the table. There are 16 important looking men sitting around one half of the table. A few of them are wearing high-ranking Army outfits. There are a few maps of the city on the walls; geographical map, road map, building map, and a satellite map. “The Rebel threat is getting to strong,” says the biggest and richest looking man, sitting at the head of the table, “I have just had some of the best of our men to ‘take care’ of this problem.” “But why them?” says a rather pale looking man, most likely a vampire, “cant we just send in a strong force and destroy them in one swing?” “No!” says the big man, “it must be done quietly,” big man starts to look nervous, “If-if any of the people find out we are divided they will overthrow our power!” He replied quickly. The others in the room look like they get it, but mostly just don’t want to try to argue, and possibly loose there positions; good work was extremely rare to find those days, unless of course you were joining up into the Alliance, but even then, positions were hard to find. “Now, distributing rations to the people” the voice of a member of the board fades out and outside the window, going through it, there are pillars of smoke in the distance, and the streets look like they are covered in ash and old age.
Scene 5 - The train has just left a refueling station about a mile from the beginning of a large forest, which covers part of the mountain that is looming in front of them. With the station fading into the distance the train continues to make its way along, now entering the dense forest. Ahead of the train, past the mountain they are starting to climb, there is a large mountain of rocks; the tracks can be seen going into a crevice in the side. The moans have quieted down a bit, and the sky is quickly getting darker.
Inside the train, Bruce, Lucas, and Elliot, are seated in the diner car, eating a meal, while Marty is in the Engine, Christy in her room, Noelani in hers, and Scott is in the lab area of the meeting room they were all in earlier. Suddenly, Noelani rushes out of her room into the corridor of the train car she’s in. She sniffs the air, and quietly listening she can hear the sounds of scratching and moaning from 2 cars down {the car that the rooms are in is second to last(the diner car is last) before the cars with the zombies in it}. Her eyes go wide and she rushes back into her room and hurries out with her crossbow around her shoulder and is pulling her spiked gloves on. She runs up to the engine room and says quickly to Marty “There alive, 1st car before the diner. Hurry!” then opens a hatch on the side of the wall, leading to the outside; she steps out and slams the door behind her. As soon as she leaves Marty grabs his shotgun from a nearby gun rack along with a handful of ammo which he shoves into a pouch on his belt. Then he opens a box under the gun rack and pulls out 10 clips of ammo for his pistols, which he clips onto the front of his belt. He runs through the door, closing it behind him. Out the front window the sun has set completely and the sky is quickly becoming black. There is a large mass of dark storm clouds ahead of them.
Running into the next car he wakes up Scott who has fallen asleep while working on something. “Scott! Zombies! Diner!” he shouts at him before leaving the room. Scott jumps up and grabs his pack; tossing what he was working on (grenades) into the bag he grabs a metal pipe that is leaning against the wall. In the next car Marty is coming out of his room with his trusty claymore hanging in its sheath, around his back. He hears footsteps above him, and quickly loads his shotgun.
Noelani is running atop the car with her sniper rifle in hand. She runs to the edge of the car she’s on and jumps over onto the next one without pausing. A second later as she is about halfway across the next car she does stop. Looking at the cars behind the one she’s standing on she can clearly see arms and heads, flailing out of the windows in the next 5 or so cars. Quickly dropping to her stomach, as not to be seen, she commando crawls forward to the edge of the car. Looking down she can see about 5 of the zombies, packed tight, right outside the door to the car she was on, trying to get in. Noelani loads the rifle with a clip and getting on one knee; she points the gun down and fires into their heads. They die and fall onto the ground rushing fast underneath them, only to be replaced by more. She reloads with another clip and fires again; this time getting the attention of the zombies. As more are coming through the door, she continues to fire, and reload. One particularly fat zombie, with a bleeding stump that used to be an arm, looks up at her, and lets out a long, and eerie moan, warning the others, right before getting its head blown off. Noelani uses up the last clip of ammunition for her sniper rifle and before she switches to her crossbow break through the door.
Bruce, Lucas, and Elliot, sitting in the diner car, jump up in great surprise when they hear Noelani’s rifle going off outside the car. Suddenly they hear a loud pounding on the door. The next second, it blew open, and 7 zombies rushed in. caught completely off guard, Bruce and Elliot cower in fear behind a table that got knocked over. Lucas ran towards the zombies and hits one of them over the head with a chair. Not a second later, Marty bursts through the other door with two pistols in his hand. He fires 7 rounds and 7 zombies fall dead to the floor, with their heads blown off. Bruce and Elliot run through the door that Marty just came from, and met Christy, who was running out of her compartment and towards the loud bangs coming from the next car. Taking her modified Sub-Machine gun with her.
Marty sees Christy entering the room and moves to the side. Ducking behind knocked over table for protection he continues firing with his pistols into the growing onslaught of zombies. Christy fires into the mass of zombies, dead and alive, killing more. Seeing Lucas in trouble, Marty sticks his pistols into his belt and pulls out his claymore, then charges forward. Cutting off the head of the first zombie in front of him and knocking over the second, he swings his sword quickly, causing a few zombies behind him to fall back dead. He swings it forward into the zombie that was on top of Lucas and the zombie gets hurled out of the window. Grabbing Lucas he drags him back. Christy fires to cover them as Marty is half carrying an unconscious Lucas out of the train car. Christy backs up and closes the door behind her. Scott comes up from behind them, as Elliot is looking at a bleeding Lucas in a side compartment, and welds the door shut.
Concept - A train on the way to dispose of the zombie bodies is carrying zombies that aren’t dead and they attack the 7 people manning the train. More zombies are on the tracks and manage to destroy part of a bridge ahead of the train, and also get onto the train, overwhelming the people on the train. They all are killed except for 2, one of which manages to get off the train before it goes over the wrecked bridge, then is found by zombies and attacked by them. He fights back for a few minutes before being overwhelmed and killed. The other doesn’t make it off the train and the whole train, including about 30 cars that contain dead zombies, goes off the bridge into a ravine and blows up. There is also a river at the bottom of it and parts of zombies float away, possibly infecting the water, which can lead to another movie.
Characters - Marty Butler - human
Bruce Fitzpatrick - human
Christi Glover - human
Elliot Stevenson - human
Scott Wagner - human
Noelani Church - vampire
Lucas Stein - vampire
4 male humans -
Marty Butler is a very well known leader. He was single handedly responsible for the protection of the leaders of the Alliance and on many occasions was the one sole human survivor in many zombie killing, and supply raiding missions. He is known especially for showing up last minute and saving everyone with his shotgun, 2 pistols, and his huge and strong 5 and a half-foot long claymore. He usually always takes the lead when sent out on missions, and tries his hardest to make sure everyone survives. He specializes in weapons and tactics.
Scott Wagner is an explosives expert. He specializes in chemistry, and always has his own personal bag of chemicals on him. He has training with some of the best chemists in the area and can whip up a batch of C4 or napalm in a matter of minutes. He also has a very powerful nose, and can smell almost any scent within 30 yards. He prefers to fight the zombies with small explosive grenades and flamethrowers.
Bruce Fitzpatrick is the brainiac of the group. He has exceptional hacking and engineering abilities and has designed many of the Alliance’s war vehicles. He is often found in the main computer mainframe in the Alliance HQ and works constantly making a satellite-tracking program that will find all the living zombies so that the Alliance may soon be able to quell the ever growing zombie threat. He also has an apprentice, whom is the daughter of one of the Alliance’s main supply of money and support.
Elliot Stevenson is the always-reliable paramedic. He and his crew of doctors have been working to find a cure for the zombie virus. So far they have managed to find a way to slow the spreading of the virus in animal test subjects, but it requires a large enough dosage of super Novocain to completely render the subject paralyzed, and is too expensive to be let out into the public.
1 female human -
Christi Glover is a calm, clever fighter, preferring to plan out her actions then put them into effect rather than just acting on impulse and hoping for the best. She helped with the cleansing of the main Alliance City with a clever sweep of the city. She has fought with the first male human before, and witnessed the great but terrible things he can do when on a rampage. She has taken a great liking to him and is there to keep him calm when he loses it whenever she can be. She has a mother-like presence and can seem to take control of different situations better than a lot of the other leaders out there. She always loves the people she works with, and is usually there to take care of them. But she also has a temper, and many have learned the hard way, most who know her are afraid to piss her off.
1 male vampire -
Lucas Stein is the mechanic of the group, preferring to sleep near the closest machine than near other humans or vampires. He is often seen as anti social and scared, but on more than one occasion his ‘6th sense’ in being able to fix things has saved many people. He is usually always fixing things and has personally helped design and construct many of the Alliance’s war vehicles. He is a very loyal vampire, and can mostly be counted on to get things done.
1 female vampire -
Noelani Church is a deadly assassin, always wearing a silver colored body suit, and wearing her deadly and infamous knife gloves; biker type gloves with very thin, but extremely strong blades that can cut through nearly anything. She also carries on her back, a crossbow, and along with the arrows, some instant killing poison tipped darts. She prefers to work alone, but is well coordinated with the others if necessary, always hanging back out of sight and using her trusty and dead accurate sniper rifle to take out her foes. She doesn’t have much of a sense of humor and distrusts most humans.
Scene 1 - Two men, Marty Butler, and Scott Wagner, walk up to a very long train in a station, behind them we see a very large looking city with about 20 foot high walls and electric fences running all around it. A guard hands them an envelope. Scott opens it, reads the papers inside, hands it to Marty, and walks towards one of the train cars. Marty, after reading the papers from the envelope, walks over to a small convenience store that’s part of the station. He grabs a few beers and a newspaper and walks over to the counter. “What’s the Alliance making you do today Marty (Butler)?” asks the man behind the counter. He is an older man, balding slightly, wearing a hat, and has a small beer belly. “Disposal work again.” He replied, “You’d think they’d pick someone with less of a record to do this, I mean, after all I’ve done for them, and it’s practically my doing that keeps them alive.” He sighs. “It happens to the best of us man” says the man behind the counter. Here’s your change, good luck.” “Keep it,” says Marty, “See you later. Maybe…” Marty walks out of the store and picks up a bag. He pulls out a shotgun that he slings over his back, and 2 pistols that he slips in his belt.
Meanwhile in the train, Christi Glover, and Noelani Church are doing check ups in the much modified train engine. Scott walks into the room and Christi looks up at him, Noelani not looking up from her work. He puts out his hand, “Scott Wag-” “We know who you are” interrupts Noelani quietly, still not looking up. Scott walks over to her, “so who else are we-” “Bruce Fitzpatrick, Elliot Stevenson, Lucas Stein. I know you already know Marty, I saw you walking up with him. That’s Christi Glover, whom I presume you already know based on your record, and I’m Noelani Church.” “Well you seem to be on top of things” sarcastically replies Scott. “It’s my job to know everything” replies Noelani. Scott shrugs and walk out the back of the engine room towards the living quarters.
Scene 2 - Everyone is sitting around a small table in one of the train cars except for Lucas who is off taking care of the engine. There are maps, and blueprints, and equipment all over the room. The train is moving. There are maps on the table and a folder that says in big red letters “TOP SECRET.” Marty opens the folder and reads it. He becomes wide eyed and drops the folder on the table. “Well men, and ladies, and vampires, this isn’t a usual dump mission. The Alliance is making the dump only a side mission; clearly you’ve noticed the strangely constructed group that we have here…” Lucas suddenly enters the room, putting something in his pocket; he walks towards the table and sits down near Noelani who is sitting at the corner of the table sharpening her hand blades. “Everything’s running smoothly up front” says Lucas “we hit a spot of flat track so I put her on auto.” “Good, now like I was saying, this is a pretty impressive looking group just for dump duty. But apparently that’s just a side mission. The Alliance wants us to go ‘infiltrate’ a base of ours that apparently has been threatening a rebellion. We have all the info about the base on the walls. Were meant to be undiscovered but its highly possible they already know were coming.” They all leave the room.
In the very back of the train, the cars filled with the dead zombies, a zombie suddenly bursts out of the bottom of the pile, he has a gash down his side and is bleeding from his mouth. He is wearing a striped shirt that is in shreds and he is completely covered in blood. Slowly he looks around the car to see all the other dead bodies. He roars, which stirs up other parts of the pile. Outside the car, the train is moving on the tracks, there are fields all around and a mountain range up ahead, the moans and yells of zombies can be heard coming from inside the train cars as it speeds towards the mountain. The sun is slowly setting behind the mountain, and a trail of smoke from the engine can be seen very far up ahead.
Scene 3- Marty is in his sleeping compartment checking and cleaning his weapons and ammo. A knock is heard at the door and without looking up from his guns he tells them to enter. Christi walks in the door and closes it behind her. She sits down in a chair opposite to Marty. He looks up and stares at her for a moment before pulling out his claymore to sharpen it. “I already know Christy, it’s a trap, a suicidal trap. If they wanted to quell a rebellion they could have sent in anyone, air strike, bombing, or just go in there with a few thousand and blow the hell out of them. But no, they sent us…” Christy looks only slightly relived to hear that he already knows but still looks worried. “You can’t do this Marty, I know how you get when forced to do something as unpleasant as kill another human being!” cries Christy. Marty slams his gun down on the table in front of him and coldly says “You think there’s something wrong with me Chris?” He gets up. “You don’t know the half of it! I sweared after we formed the Alliance to never kill another human being, and now I have to go kill hundreds of them!” “Then don’t do-“ “I don’t have a choice damnit!” Both are quiet. Marty is staring out the window, and Christy is in the same seat, a few tears rolling down her face. She gets up and pauses at the door. “I’m sorry….” She whispers before opening the door and walking out of the compartment.
Scene 4 - There is a deserted highway with a dark gloomy looking city in the background, a hanging sign that says Hammer Ford, Exit 2 Miles is swinging. A sudden gust of wind picks up dust, dirt, and papers, and blows them around a bit. The city, bird’s eye view. There are the walls surrounding the city on 2 sides. 2 rivers protect the other 2 sides of the city but there are still walls, only shorter then the others, on the banks of the river. It’s a very dark looking city, the few still standing buildings that over look everything else are gray and ashy looking. There are a few lights on, but the city mostly remains dark. There aren’t many people in the streets. A few cars here and there, but for the most part its all empty. Faces occasionally look out of doors, windows, and roofs. There is a building that has the most lights on that is down a really long and wide street with much smaller buildings on the sides of the street. The building is light up slightly and the sky is a dark ashy color from all of the fires and explosion.
There’s a big room with a long dark red oak business meeting table in the middle of the room with bright lights hanging room the ceiling over the table. There are 16 important looking men sitting around one half of the table. A few of them are wearing high-ranking Army outfits. There are a few maps of the city on the walls; geographical map, road map, building map, and a satellite map. “The Rebel threat is getting to strong,” says the biggest and richest looking man, sitting at the head of the table, “I have just had some of the best of our men to ‘take care’ of this problem.” “But why them?” says a rather pale looking man, most likely a vampire, “cant we just send in a strong force and destroy them in one swing?” “No!” says the big man, “it must be done quietly,” big man starts to look nervous, “If-if any of the people find out we are divided they will overthrow our power!” He replied quickly. The others in the room look like they get it, but mostly just don’t want to try to argue, and possibly loose there positions; good work was extremely rare to find those days, unless of course you were joining up into the Alliance, but even then, positions were hard to find. “Now, distributing rations to the people” the voice of a member of the board fades out and outside the window, going through it, there are pillars of smoke in the distance, and the streets look like they are covered in ash and old age.
Scene 5 - The train has just left a refueling station about a mile from the beginning of a large forest, which covers part of the mountain that is looming in front of them. With the station fading into the distance the train continues to make its way along, now entering the dense forest. Ahead of the train, past the mountain they are starting to climb, there is a large mountain of rocks; the tracks can be seen going into a crevice in the side. The moans have quieted down a bit, and the sky is quickly getting darker.
Inside the train, Bruce, Lucas, and Elliot, are seated in the diner car, eating a meal, while Marty is in the Engine, Christy in her room, Noelani in hers, and Scott is in the lab area of the meeting room they were all in earlier. Suddenly, Noelani rushes out of her room into the corridor of the train car she’s in. She sniffs the air, and quietly listening she can hear the sounds of scratching and moaning from 2 cars down {the car that the rooms are in is second to last(the diner car is last) before the cars with the zombies in it}. Her eyes go wide and she rushes back into her room and hurries out with her crossbow around her shoulder and is pulling her spiked gloves on. She runs up to the engine room and says quickly to Marty “There alive, 1st car before the diner. Hurry!” then opens a hatch on the side of the wall, leading to the outside; she steps out and slams the door behind her. As soon as she leaves Marty grabs his shotgun from a nearby gun rack along with a handful of ammo which he shoves into a pouch on his belt. Then he opens a box under the gun rack and pulls out 10 clips of ammo for his pistols, which he clips onto the front of his belt. He runs through the door, closing it behind him. Out the front window the sun has set completely and the sky is quickly becoming black. There is a large mass of dark storm clouds ahead of them.
Running into the next car he wakes up Scott who has fallen asleep while working on something. “Scott! Zombies! Diner!” he shouts at him before leaving the room. Scott jumps up and grabs his pack; tossing what he was working on (grenades) into the bag he grabs a metal pipe that is leaning against the wall. In the next car Marty is coming out of his room with his trusty claymore hanging in its sheath, around his back. He hears footsteps above him, and quickly loads his shotgun.
Noelani is running atop the car with her sniper rifle in hand. She runs to the edge of the car she’s on and jumps over onto the next one without pausing. A second later as she is about halfway across the next car she does stop. Looking at the cars behind the one she’s standing on she can clearly see arms and heads, flailing out of the windows in the next 5 or so cars. Quickly dropping to her stomach, as not to be seen, she commando crawls forward to the edge of the car. Looking down she can see about 5 of the zombies, packed tight, right outside the door to the car she was on, trying to get in. Noelani loads the rifle with a clip and getting on one knee; she points the gun down and fires into their heads. They die and fall onto the ground rushing fast underneath them, only to be replaced by more. She reloads with another clip and fires again; this time getting the attention of the zombies. As more are coming through the door, she continues to fire, and reload. One particularly fat zombie, with a bleeding stump that used to be an arm, looks up at her, and lets out a long, and eerie moan, warning the others, right before getting its head blown off. Noelani uses up the last clip of ammunition for her sniper rifle and before she switches to her crossbow break through the door.
Bruce, Lucas, and Elliot, sitting in the diner car, jump up in great surprise when they hear Noelani’s rifle going off outside the car. Suddenly they hear a loud pounding on the door. The next second, it blew open, and 7 zombies rushed in. caught completely off guard, Bruce and Elliot cower in fear behind a table that got knocked over. Lucas ran towards the zombies and hits one of them over the head with a chair. Not a second later, Marty bursts through the other door with two pistols in his hand. He fires 7 rounds and 7 zombies fall dead to the floor, with their heads blown off. Bruce and Elliot run through the door that Marty just came from, and met Christy, who was running out of her compartment and towards the loud bangs coming from the next car. Taking her modified Sub-Machine gun with her.
Marty sees Christy entering the room and moves to the side. Ducking behind knocked over table for protection he continues firing with his pistols into the growing onslaught of zombies. Christy fires into the mass of zombies, dead and alive, killing more. Seeing Lucas in trouble, Marty sticks his pistols into his belt and pulls out his claymore, then charges forward. Cutting off the head of the first zombie in front of him and knocking over the second, he swings his sword quickly, causing a few zombies behind him to fall back dead. He swings it forward into the zombie that was on top of Lucas and the zombie gets hurled out of the window. Grabbing Lucas he drags him back. Christy fires to cover them as Marty is half carrying an unconscious Lucas out of the train car. Christy backs up and closes the door behind her. Scott comes up from behind them, as Elliot is looking at a bleeding Lucas in a side compartment, and welds the door shut.