Comments | pepsifreak217: another poem

pepsifreak217

another poem

Jun 26, 2005 14:21

I started working on a poem on Friday night but couldn't finish it. I got like four lines and then I was stuck. So today, in church, of all places, I got to working on it again. And then I finished the last two lines that I needed in the van on the way home. It's a pretty good poem I guess. I don't know. You guys tell me what you think. I'll leave ( Read more... )

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blazing_xstarz June 26 2005, 19:03:52 UTC

I like that poem.. no no, I LOVE that poem. I'm inspired. I think i'm going to try and write a GOOD poem for the first time in forever. Yea... you better watch out KT!

pepsifreak217 June 26 2005, 19:09:42 UTC

Well I'm glad that I "inspired" you. It's always a good thing to do something like that. And you should write a good poem. I love it when you write a poem because you don't do it all the time like I pretty much do and it's always great to be able to read something that you write. And don't worry Kerri, I will watch out. You can give me the lecture if you want, even though I helped you through most of it. But I swear I'll be careful. I'll pay attention to everything. Especially the little things. Men aren't very bright sometimes and they don't pay attention to the little things most of the time.