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perfect_pride

FIC: Impossible (20/30)

Sep 14, 2011 19:38

Title: Impossible
Author: perfect_pride
Pairing: Hermione/Bellatrix
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: It goes without saying that none of the Harry Potter world or its’ characters belong to me, unfortunately. Neither do the lyrics.
Warnings: Mental and physical abuse/torture.
Summary: Bellatrix abducts Hermione and keeps her prisoner, but an ancient magic threatens to change ( Read more... )

harry potter, fic, fic: impossible, pairing: hermione/bellatrix

Comments 6

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perfect_pride September 17 2011, 23:42:12 UTC

Haha, glad I made your day! :)

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perfect_pride September 17 2011, 23:47:06 UTC

Well I'm debating a sequel or some one-shots. I'm leaning towards a Hermione/Narcissa fic for my next one though. :) I don't plan to give up on Bellatrix/Hermione fics, I'd just like to try a Hermione/Narcissa fic next.

Haha, I love that you worked that out. :P Thank you for the praise, this review is a really nice compliment. :)

kali_blue September 15 2011, 20:49:05 UTC

Yeah Rodolphus and Voldemorte are DEAD! Glad Ms. Wesley did the deed & then Harry to V. Nice to see Dumbledore on the wall.

I liked your subtle changes to weave the plot. Cissy seemed a bit bitchier than I imagined. I have a few theories why, but I'll wait to see if you disclose what got stuck on in her craw. Same thing with Bella getting snippy with Hermione; maybe its a post battle reaction the Black women exhibit- LOL.

I could see Lucius Malfoy being punished by having to work for Mr. Weasley on muggle relations. It would be a social stigma for LM, although it does seem unfair to saddle Mr. Wealey with him.

Can't wait to see what's next. Kali

perfect_pride September 17 2011, 23:53:55 UTC

Thank yooou. Yeah, in the book Narcissa comes across as much nastier than in the film, so I went with that. Feel like sharing your theories? I'm curious as to what you're thinking. :P

Haha, I totally agree. I don't focus on Lucius at all so his job is highly unlikely to come up, but I like the idea. ;)

Thank you for the review! <3

demoka September 16 2011, 02:14:33 UTC

.... Oh Hermione, like Dumbledore's portrait said, she's not gonna change over night! You gotta keep working at it with her ( ... )

perfect_pride September 17 2011, 23:58:29 UTC

Yeah I thought Soul Healer would be an apt name. :P

Don't worry, Bellatrix is never going to be sweet, at least not in a typical way. She keeps her personality, even during her softer moments!

If I do a sequel then there will probably be more Malfoy involvement, but for the moment they're not in it that much. I'm not a huge Lucius fan, I have to admit. :P

I know, I wish that J.K Had put that in the final confrontation. I didn't want to change what happened too much unless it was related to Hermione or Bellatrix though, as I'm following canon events.

Thank yooou <3