FIC: Impossible (22/30)

[perfect_pride]

Title: Impossible
Author: perfect_pride
Pairing: Hermione/Bellatrix
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: It goes without saying that none of the Harry Potter world or its’ characters belong to me, unfortunately. Neither do the lyrics.
Warnings: Mental and physical abuse/torture.
Summary: Bellatrix abducts Hermione and keeps her prisoner, but an ancient magic threatens to change

Comments

[rachel452]

Now that I'm all caught up I wonder if I should wait to read each update til there's a few I can sink my teeth into so I don't have to wait to read more, but my curiosity always wins out! I just can't wait! Lucky for me you're a fast updater!

Nice to see Bellatrix's softer side of Sears, poor Neville. I also enjoy the conflicting emotions of hating the person you're in love with. These two don't have it easy.

[perfect_pride]

Hehe, that's exactly why I try to post long, substantial parts... it drives me mad when there are fics I love with short chapters! Glad you appreciate my update rate... I do try despite my insane lifestyle, haha.

Thanks very much :)

[demoka]

*giggles hysterically* But OF COURSE you would have Bella like kids! (Especially the quiet ones, they don't give her a headache!)

And you're still doing wonderfully well with the conflicting sides of how this relationship can possibly work! It's just CHOCK FULL OF pros & cons!

And yes, torturing people into insanity is the WORST way to gain info. Rodolphus you blithering idiot! Gah, poor Bella for having to have been married to him!

And yes, Bella herself is a tad insane, so, her mood swings are totally to be expected... *huggles Hermione* Keep at it!

[perfect_pride]

I thought Bellatrix liking children would be a nice twist... and it's never been mentioned in canon that she doesn't like children, so it works! Though I do remember her saying if she had sons she would give them to the Dark Lord's service, haha.

Glad you're liking the conflict!

Yeah Rodolphus always struck me as a bit dull, and men in general never seem to know when to just quit anyway. :P

Thanks as always <3

[kali_blue]

Great flashback memory presentation! I liked how Neville got to see he parents loving per-insanity even if hard to watch. I agree w/ demoka about Rudolphus idiot status and truly a crime Bella was married to that rancid twit.

Also nice touch in Bella only sharing her thoughts with Herminone & not explaining to Neville- that seems more in character.

Loved the toss out about her liking kids, twisting Hermione's perceived knowledge of Bellatrix.

next thing you know they'll be raising quiet orphaned pure bloods, Doubtful ministry would go for starting the the Black-Granger Orphanage. ;)

Kali

[perfect_pride]

I wanted a nice moment for Neville with his parents, and this was the only thing I could think to do in a realistic fashion!

Haha, I wish! Doubt there would be many pure-blood orphans unfortunately! Although if I ever did a sequel set in the far future, then I would definitely consider shoving a baby in there somewhere if I could think up an interesting storyline...

[perfect_pride]

Thank yooou. I'm glad you think so as I work very hard on getting their personalities right! :)