FIC: Impossible (23/30)

[perfect_pride]

Title: Impossible
Author: perfect_pride
Pairing: Hermione/Bellatrix
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: It goes without saying that none of the Harry Potter world or its’ characters belong to me, unfortunately. Neither do the lyrics.
Warnings: Mental and physical abuse/torture.
Summary: Bellatrix abducts Hermione and keeps her prisoner, but an ancient magic threatens to change

Comments

[musicffyou]

wow...you've captured Hermione's feeling so wonderfully. At the end of each chapter, I feel love and hate for the relationship. I wish Hermione could be with someone better but then I don't. I'm conflicted just like Hermione!! I would like to request some more scenes of them acting...more in love/as a couple/happy with each other. I don't know what I'm trying to say because acting like this isn't like Bellatrix or would it really make sense for how you've shaped their relationship. Ok I'm gonna stop writing now hahaha

Thanks for the update!

[perfect_pride]

That's exactly how I feel when I'm writing it. I don't want Bellatrix to do and say all these horrible things, but it wouldn't be realistic for me to have her being all hearts and flowers towards Hermione. There are lots of moments with them to come in the remaining part of the fic, but they're not always going to be happy because it doesn't work for them, and I don't want this to turn into fluffy crap that ruins the fic. But I do have a feeling you'll like the next chapter. :P

Thanks for the review!

[perfect_pride]

Haha, I know! I'm sad it's coming towards the end too, but don't worry, I have lots more fics planned for the future! :) I can't wait until next May/June when I'm going to live in New York for a bit (it's been my dream for a few years and am saving hard for it) and quit my stressful job here in the UK... it means I'll have lots more time for writing fanfic, and maybe a chance to work on an actual novel of my own too. :)

Thanks for the review. :)

[demoka]

Oh... you didn't? Did you? Oh, you described Narcissa as having raven & blonde hair?! Why?! She's BLONDE damnit! *being childish & cries*

XP

But mm, love how this is ridiculously hard for the both of them, as it SHOULD be! Eeee! Are we gonna see Andromeda?! Eeee!

Had a good giggle at this bit:
“Are you implying I’m a man?” Hermione asked with a frown, trying to work out in her head what Bellatrix meant. “Or a Muggle?”
Also, that moment of Bella deciding what exactly to call Hermione as her significant other, cute! XP

*huggles Bellatrix for wanting to be the centre of attention* Well, that's gotta be one of the reasons for her personality!

Great stuff once again!

[perfect_pride]

I was *waiting* for somebody to comment on that. I'll admit, initially I wasn't a fan of the look in the HBP but then in the DH's movies I was like SO HOT. Haha. I have a total crush on Narcissa with her hair like that, hence why I've put it in. I take it you're not a fan?! :P

You will see Andromeda before the end. :)

Thank you very much. :P

[rachel452]

Heehee Hermione is Bellatrix's special friend. I like seeing the sweet scenes between the two of them, makes the other conflicting times easier.

Great update as always!

[perfect_pride]

Haha, yeah. I was going to call her "Bellatrix's bitch" but I might save that one for the future... figured it wouldn't be too funny in that exact situation. :P

Thanks for the review! :)

[kali_blue]

Not sorry Ron is being hard to reach; lunker

[perfect_pride]

Haha, I hate Ron too and if I had my way he would just piss off and emigrate to a far away land outside the world of HP, but Hermione likes him in canon and I wanted to keep this real. ::P