FIC: Impossible (27/30)

[perfect_pride]

Title: Impossible
Author: perfect_pride
Pairing: Hermione/Bellatrix
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: It goes without saying that none of the Harry Potter world or its’ characters belong to me, unfortunately. Neither do the lyrics.
Warnings: Mental and physical abuse/torture.
Summary: Bellatrix abducts Hermione and keeps her prisoner, but an ancient magic threatens to change

Comments

[musicffyou]

I love this fic and think you're writing is amazing and you're doing a wonderful job but, and I feel like a jerk for saying this, I don't want them together anymore. This whole chapter I spent wanting Hermione to leave Bella or the true love spell to vanish. I usually spend half the chapter not wanting this together then the other half glad that they're together but this time I didn't get that feeling. Hermione is 100% right, it's not fair that for all she is and all she could be she has to be stuck with a person who's kinda horrible. Ok well you know what, I'm done complaining. This fic is realistic and I'm just being a baby :D Can't wait for the next chapter and thanks for updating!

[perfect_pride]

Well I'm hopeful that by the end of the fic you'll think differently. I know that Bellatrix is a total arse 99% of the time, but that's what makes her realistic, I think. She's slowly learning, but it takes time and isn't going to happen overnight. The next chapter shows some improvement as far as her behaviour goes, so I'm optimistic that you won't get that same feeling if you decide to read that one. :) Thanks for the review.

[demoka]

*giggles at the fact that Bella had to check with “Threatening you will just make you leave?” Sad isn't it? But then having Bella be awkward about it was adorable.

That whole last bit was utterly adorable and I just wanna huggle Bellatrix for being more affectionate, even if she were to hex me! XP

I'm glad you had Hagrid at Diagon Alley. Call it nostalgia.

And OMG at the memory... Guh, can't have been easy growing up with those two as parents! ...and now makes me wonder, will you have a Lemmy memory? Maybe a little history as to why Bella is relatively affectionate to Lemmy?

*giggles at the thought of Bella & Crookshanks meeting* Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next, ooh, illicit sneaking at Hogwarts!

[perfect_pride]

Well I wanted to pick a random character from HP and imagine their reaction to Bellatrix and Hermione... as you can see, Hagrid won. :P Glad you liked that decision!

I haven't actually thought about a Lemmy memory... maybe if I can think of one I'll put it in the sequel if I decide to write it. :P

Thanks for the review!

[jaws_of_fenrir]

I love this fic, I keep looking for other B/H fics but none measure up and it's quite maddening. Thank goodness you update so often. :)

[perfect_pride]

Thank you very much. :) If you do fine any Bellatrix/Hermione fics that you love, point me in the right direction please as quality fic for this pairing is few and far between!

[jaws_of_fenrir]

This fic cracked me up in a few places. I liked all of it but it's worth a read for the Voldemort parts alone.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7312360/1/

[perfect_pride]

Woo, thanks for the rec! I am definitely going to get started on this as soon as I have a chance... a bonus that it's completed too! You rock <3

[perfect_pride]

Well there are only 3 chapters after this one so I'm limited in exactly what I can do with them. If I do a sequel then it will most likely be with Hermione back at Hogwarts, but a sequel hasn't even been planned out yet and is a long way off. I suppose the easiest way to sum up what the next 3 chapters do without giving too much away is that they tie up loose ends.

Thanks for the review. :)