A Granted Wish for chibikaoruchan

[vierblith_tefu]

Title: The Lone Samurai
Godmother: [Magic Lamp]
Wisher: chibikaoruchan
Fairy Tale: The Little Match Girl
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Tezuka/Fuji, slight Oshitari/Atobe, with little appearances of other characters.
Rating: PG
Warning(s): Lots of angst. Character’s death(s). Little bits of tragedy and violence in the prologue, but it shouldn’t be too

Comments

[chibikaoruchan]

Hum... I'm here just to steal first comment. XD

I haven't read it yet, but I have a fairly good guess on who you are, dear Godmother. (Ok, more like im 200% sure of who you are, cough)XD The writing style matches perfectly with ___________'s.

I'll be reading it shortly and tell you what I think of it!

[chibikaoruchan]

Ok I read it. And I cried.

Kfskdfiawuerbkjgfhuiosektjer!!!! *Keyboard smash* Such a sad-happy ending! I can't stop crying... Poor Tezuka, left alone! I almost cried at the part where Fuji was dying... and then when Tezuka had finally found Fuji I cried. And I still am crying... Ah I loved this fic so much...

'He wondered why he saw a group of fat rabbits jumping here and there around the snowy garden.' LOL!!! Tezuka seeing fat rabbits! XDDDD

[a1y_puff]

Did u guess me right, dear godchild? xD

Anyway me is glad u liked it. I wasn't sure since it's my first time writing something like this, but I'm happy to make u cry :p

tho i'm not sure this is what u've expected from the prompt xD;

[chibikaoruchan]

I first got it wrong. Then got it right, thanks to Tacuma-chan~ XDDD She emailed me saying that you asked me if I knew who my godmother was, and I knew you were XDDDD

You heartless person!! XDDD I Cried and ur happy!!!! XDD Ok, I cry with some TeFu happy endings too *cough* XDDDD Dw I loved the fic (and u) nonetheless.

Well, I was only expecting something angsty. So well... you can say I wasn't expecting anything. xD

[elysis]

This was beautiful. Although there's lot of angst and characters' death. I didn't really feel somber at all. Probably due to the peaceful atmosphere (despite those fighting scene) and I had a feeling that Fuji will come and take Tezuka with him (So it's true in the end ^^;).

I think I liked that part which Tezuka used Fuji's move with his right hand, and the ending as well.
Tezuka died in a very peaceful way. And I was glad that at least Oshitari undertand it.

[tacuma811]

So beautiful, but so sad at the same time. *Wipes tears*
Yuuta's death was sad, Fuji's death made me really cry (I'm such a crybaby), but Tezuka's death was beautiful, with Fuji smiling at him and the light. Dying like that isn't bad at all.

I love how everybody is worried about Tezuka, everybody cares for him and tries to help him. But he only wanted to be with Fuji and in the end he is.

[mitsu_syusuke]

u make me cry,from the beginning until the end...TT^TT
i bet my family must take me as an idiot, crying infront of my laptop...

this is so beautifully written,and i like the scence tezuka used fuji's move.. love yhe ending too, though it's not a happy one but at least they're together...

thank you for sharing this beautiful piece! ^^

[a1y_puff]

Aww, sorry to have made u cried from d beginning till the end! *gives tissue*

Thank u so much! i'm glad u enjoyed this :D
and yes, tezuka using Fuji's move was also one of my fave scenes :3

thx 4 reading!

[thallein]

Aiy!!! *clings* sorry for the late comment! But here's the looong review I promised

[a1y_puff]

Katie! *glomps*
thanks so much for reviewing, and whoaaa, I'm speechless reading your review! *___*

First of all, thanks so much for beta-ing this fic, even though character's death is ur squeak, and this fic has a lot of it xD;;
I really am grateful for ur help! *hugs*

Thanks for leaving me a detailed review too! I'm happy u pointed the things worked for u, and am glad u enjoyed this so much, coz I enjoyed writing it and am satisfied with the outcome. this fic was a headache, so reviews like this rly makes me happy <3

I dunno what else I should say, just thanks! and I will try to keep up my future fics too! pls look forward to them ne :D

P.S. After writing this, my plotbunnies died for quite some time and they weren't rly cooperative when I really should write Tezuka's b'day fic yesterday that it resulted in a very last minute fic xD;
I wonder if the bloody plot bunnies in this fic scared the fluffy plot bunnies away xD;

[lovefujitez]

Nicely done Aiy. Finally finished reading the entire fic.I didn't mind it at all, being a death fic because in the end, they were back with each other.

Fall is such a beautiful time of the year but filled with melancholy and using the season as background to depict the sadness in Tezuka and Fuji's life was very dramatic, and the imagery it sets added depth to the emotions I, as a reader experienced while reading the story.

Great job and thank you for writing such a wonderful story with Souji and Hijikata included, I love you for that.

so glad I brought my laptop with me! This conference is so boring!
*smiles*