AHH I DIDN'T FINISH READING BUT I JUST HAD TO SAY SOMETHING FIRST!
This is absolutely amazing. It's so well written, and your style is very flowing and ethereal! I love your word choice and your sentence structures and just everything! Plus its a long fic, so I can enjoy more of the world you created!
Okay, I'll go back to reading this, and when I'm done you'll get a bigger (and better) comment!
Ahhhhh I loved this. It grew on me slowly and the build up was so worth it. It was so them, but with all the AU elements and my chest hurts now. Thank you for writing this.
i've been staring at this blank space for a while and i'm speechless i don't know how to properly word my review on this fic omfg
starting off, i was a bit confused at the beginning and then gradually, i started to get into it mainly because i was entertaining the idea of baekhyun as a vampire and it is sUCH A beautiful imagery,, thank u also u wrote his character so well so endearing and i kind of fell for it so hard
honestly kyungsoo's character has been suCH a favourite i'm soooooo in love with the little interactions you have between him and baekhyun!!! the part where they imitate moans from porn??? Brilliant, what a brilliant scene. also baekhyun's r/s with taeyeon here is so. .. .... nice. i love how protective he is of her and this little bit!!! “You always doll up for the tiny human,” Kyungsoo says. He’s lazing on top of a bookshelf, his front plastered to the ceiling. “She deserves me at my best,” Baekhyun replies, passing by. loves it so much
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This is absolutely amazing. It's so well written, and your style is very flowing and ethereal! I love your word choice and your sentence structures and just everything! Plus its a long fic, so I can enjoy more of the world you created!
Okay, I'll go back to reading this, and when I'm done you'll get a bigger (and better) comment!
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starting off, i was a bit confused at the beginning and then gradually, i started to get into it mainly because i was entertaining the idea of baekhyun as a vampire and it is sUCH A beautiful imagery,, thank u also u wrote his character so well so endearing and i kind of fell for it so hard
honestly kyungsoo's character has been suCH a favourite i'm soooooo in love with the little interactions you have between him and baekhyun!!! the part where they imitate moans from porn??? Brilliant, what a brilliant scene. also baekhyun's r/s with taeyeon here is so. .. .... nice. i love how protective he is of her and this little bit!!! “You always doll up for the tiny human,” Kyungsoo says. He’s lazing on top of a bookshelf, his front plastered to the ceiling.
“She deserves me at my best,” Baekhyun replies, passing by. loves it so much ( ... )
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