There was a tense change somewhere, and a couple spelling errors [but you probably hate to re-read your own work like I do!] but I reckon you were just too keen to get to teh boisex!!!111!!
And you know my deal on Billy and Quinn, one big power struggle, so I like how you got some teasing in there, and the whole feeling of Billy not caring/noticing if a fan was taking photos was enough to make me smile - I mean, we'd never be out spying waiting to do that would we... *coughs*
I knew you shouldn't have been nervous! *daydreams more of Billy/Quinn* :)
I had to put 'potato' in there somewhere, and that was the only way I could think about.
I hate rereading my work, which is why I need a beta reader. But now that I know there were spelling mistakes, I'll have to go and reread it, suffer through my work, and find them. Stupid Word for not catching them.
We'd never spy on them! Why would you even think that we might possibly do something like that? *smiles innocenty*
Not be nervous? I still am, even more now that I know I have spelling errors.
That... was just wonderful, and the whole 'potato' deal was a nice touch. There's something about your writing style that I really, really like. And the fact that it was one of my favorite pairings was a definite plus. <333
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There was a tense change somewhere, and a couple spelling errors [but you probably hate to re-read your own work like I do!] but I reckon you were just too keen to get to teh boisex!!!111!!
And you know my deal on Billy and Quinn, one big power struggle, so I like how you got some teasing in there, and the whole feeling of Billy not caring/noticing if a fan was taking photos was enough to make me smile - I mean, we'd never be out spying waiting to do that would we... *coughs*
I knew you shouldn't have been nervous!
*daydreams more of Billy/Quinn* :)
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I hate rereading my work, which is why I need a beta reader. But now that I know there were spelling mistakes, I'll have to go and reread it, suffer through my work, and find them. Stupid Word for not catching them.
We'd never spy on them! Why would you even think that we might possibly do something like that? *smiles innocenty*
Not be nervous? I still am, even more now that I know I have spelling errors.
Thanks for the feed back. :-*
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