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[perfectgenius]

Title(s): Extraordinary Girl
Author: julia_dreamer
Fandom(s): Naruto
Pairing(s): ItaAnko
Length: 835
Summary: "The ground was littered with paperwork, report after report of missions failed and completed, medical files with chilling descriptions of autopsies, journals filled with horrific descriptions of experiments gone wrong, papers with 'Sannin no Orochimaru

Comments

[glitteringloke]

interesting backstory... tho i still think you should have left anko's name out of it

[julia_dreamer]

Heh. You jsut wait until the OroAnko gets written. >>;;

...I'm debating on taking it out, actually. .-.

[glitteringloke]

that... i could see that, but i'd worry about pedophilia..

[julia_dreamer]

No, no, no, I wouldn't!! >O

[emi01]

Because she was in there somewhere. A little part of her, a little part of her life, trapped on paper. All he had to do was look.

Lovely. ♥

[julia_dreamer]

Hm. .x.

[emi01]

hm?

[nefyr]

o__o

BURNINATION

[julia_dreamer]

It's always the best reply. >>

[redbrunja]

Lovely. I really like the idea of Itachi being tempted to read about Anko and what it says about that relationship that he ended up burning the information. That said, calling Anko perfect really didn't work for me. She's an angry, broken, violent kunoichi with a sweet tooth, and I don't think Itachi would have ever thought of her as perfect, regardless of how he feels about her.

*memes*

[julia_dreamer]

Thanks for the comment, I was starting to think no one but my friends had seen this. ^^;

Ah, well, I didn't really mean that he thought of her as perfect, more that the memories he had of her was perfect because someone else's memories - in this case Orochimaru's - would be flawed.

[redbrunja]

I understood what you meant, but the adjectives you chose did throw me out of the fic. I would consider phrasing it a bit differently, making it clearer that he didn't want his memories of what must have been a violent, broken, brillant woman tainted.