Comments | persephone100: The Beckoning of Angels Post 6

persephone100

The Beckoning of Angels Post 6

Oct 29, 2011 14:28

The next day, I decided to go fishing alone and try to think. As I was on my way to the river, a thought occurred to me. I could walk past Mr. Harrison’s house to get to the river. If anyone saw me, I was just a kid going fishing, but maybe I’d see Mr. Harrison walking alone or sitting in his ( Read more... )

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U got me Checking for Chapys every few minute calgslinger October 29 2011, 21:50:30 UTC

U...tease, being a worry wart,I expecting the worst and I am not looking forward to everything being perfect, then poor Tom will have to deal with the out come! Please make me totally wrong...I love happy endings, but they doesn't alway happen in real life... LOL that why I like fiction where the author makes thing happy ever after, even if it is a fantasy.

Silly, Cal the G

Re: U got me Checking for Chapys every few minute persephone100 October 30 2011, 03:22:17 UTC

Tom is having a hard time keeping his emotions in check-LOL. And I really hope you like the way the story turns out! I also very much appreciate your interest in my fic! :D Thanks again!

lellihir October 30 2011, 08:57:15 UTC

Well, I think things go too smooth and I'm still waiting for the bitter end. Men and Wraeththu can't be friends all of a sudden, right? Especially, when religion is there. Or is it just me being pessimist? :)
I hope you don't be angry with me if I say Tom was a little girlish on the jealousy scene but I think for a human it is hard to understand the ways of the Wraeththu and Tom is just a boy with hormones. :)
I will be waiting for the next chapter!
Thanks, I loved it.

persephone100 October 30 2011, 14:22:45 UTC

Tom is exactly that-childish, human and jealous! LOL He knows he shouldn't feel like that but he can't help it. And you picked up on a couple of other points, too! Thanks so much for your comments-and for reading! :D

faramirhaldir October 30 2011, 16:35:03 UTC

Oh I have a really bad feeling here that things are going to get very sticky and possibly violent. Tom is a typical human boy, insecurities and all, lucky for him Cirrus is very sweet and patient.

Truly loving this story and can't wait for more.

persephone100 October 30 2011, 22:13:45 UTC

Yes, Cirrus is very patient with Tom but he's smitten as well LOL though more 'evolved' when it comes to jealousy, perhaps. I'm so glad you are loving the story! Thanks so much and for your comments! :D