Comments | persephone100: The Beckoning of Angels Post 8

persephone100

The Beckoning of Angels Post 8

Nov 06, 2011 10:19

Voices…I hear voices in the distance. Maybe it’s one voice. I want it to stop. All I want is to sleep.
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Voices again. Why can’t they leave me alone? It’s one voice now. What is it saying? Maybe if I answer it will stop. If I can just open my eyes…

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snippetygiblets November 6 2011, 17:25:21 UTC

Lovely !! So glad it was a happy ending. loved reading about the family's reaction to Tom's transition to Scarlet. I've always thought that was kind of an underplayed part of the books, even though there are communities where hard and humans peacefully co-exist. Great story. hanks for posting :0)

persephone100 November 6 2011, 22:56:32 UTC

Thanks so much for your kind comments!! <3 I'm glad you liked the happy ending, too! I like to have some drama and trouble in my fics but I'm addicted to happy endings, it seems! LOL Thanks for reading!! :D

snippetygiblets November 7 2011, 12:28:13 UTC

You can't beat a good happy ending. I like the good ideas you have about aspects of ordinary harish. Life that we don't see so much of in the original books. looking forward to the next one :0)

Ah living happily ever after... calgslinger November 6 2011, 19:37:27 UTC

Loved the ending, to bad real life can't be so easy! I'll look forward to more of your hara stories...with greedy anticipation! Cal the Gslinger

Re: Ah living happily ever after... persephone100 November 6 2011, 23:01:00 UTC

Thanks so much for reading my story and for your lovely comments and encouragement! :D I love happy endings and the few stories of mine where that doesn't happen usually have a sequel! LOL. Hope I can finish the next fic in the not-too-distant future! :D

sildil November 6 2011, 20:34:21 UTC

Sweet and tender - lovely <3

persephone100 November 6 2011, 23:04:13 UTC

Awww, thanks so much! <3 There were several places I had thought to end the story and leave the rest to the reader's imagination, but I couldn't end it without an aruna scene! LOL. Thank you for following my fic and for your comments! :D

lellihir November 9 2011, 18:22:42 UTC

Everybody survived except two men. It's ok.
I liked it and was glad for the happy ending. Somewhere deep I thought it would be a good ending.
Thanks for writing for us.

persephone100 November 10 2011, 04:58:32 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the ending. I've always been a sucker for happily ever after, or at least something hopeful. Not all fics can end that way, but i wanted this one to. Thanks for reading! :D