Comments | persephone_kore: Voice Post: "Errantry" by J. R. R. Tolkien

persephone_kore

Voice Post: "Errantry" by J. R. R. Tolkien

Nov 10, 2007 00:59

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gabri_jade November 10 2007, 06:08:52 UTC

I have no idea what you read, but the reading itself was quite impressive. :D

persephone_kore November 10 2007, 06:10:25 UTC

Er. Oops. "Errantry" by J. R. R. Tolkien, for a challenge fomented by kalquessa.

And thank you, but there are many better ones in the group. Less breathy, for one thing. *wince*

gabri_jade November 10 2007, 06:12:50 UTC

Ah. It did sound rather Tolkien-ish.

I wouldn't worry about the breathiness. It's not that noticable. What I noticed was that you had a good rhythm and didn't stumble over any of those long passages. ;)

persephone_kore November 10 2007, 06:22:12 UTC

"Goes merrily forever on" and "under hill and over hill" will probably make me think Tolkien even if I encounter them somewhere totally unrelated. If such exists. ;)

The rhythm kind of takes you over, really.

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