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personafalsify

How's My Driving?

Jan 18, 2013 08:06

How's My Driving?

What do you think about how I play Riku Replica? Things you like, things you hate, things to improve on? Please give me a little more to work off of than "You suck, go die in a fire" as that tends not to help me actually improve my playing.

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anonymous November 9 2010, 00:41:48 UTC

Not crit so much as a question. I've been trying to look back in Replica's entries but haven't found a real answer for this question and the people I've asked have no idea either. I probably didn't go back far enough but I've been wondering this since August so idk.

Anyways. What's up with the Replica? Why is he a heartless?

personafalsify November 9 2010, 01:48:31 UTC

Right, this is one of the things that I never adequately explained in a visible place, did I? Whoops, uh. Sorry about that ( ... )

anonymous November 9 2010, 03:15:37 UTC

It explains everything well enough for me. /o/ Thanks!

anonymous May 15 2011, 04:40:38 UTC

this is just something i've been noticing with your posts for awhile now. i know being a heartless really limits rep's cr possibilities, but (from what i gathered in your ooc note to the previous anon) his heart being "damaged" is what's made him a heartless, right? so he needs to learn to reconnect with people and start accepting them and making friends and all that stuff if he wants to change back, right? (i'm pretty canon blind with kingdom hearts, sorry ( ... )

personafalsify May 15 2011, 06:15:41 UTC

I can see why you're saying that. The most recent post was meant to be focused particularly towards his housemates since they specifically would notice he's gone, and that was the point of the post. Honestly the reason why he could be found outside his home at all was in case someone else had some reason why they really needed to interact with him; I threw it in mostly as an afterthought and didn't intend it to be a major point.

Usually I try to make his posts more open, and this semester really kicked my ass so I haven't been posting as much with any of my characters (not just Rep), so I think the closed-off post stood out more than it normally would have since it was the first post after a long dry spell.

That said, is there something in particular you could suggest for his other posts? He hasn't done a poll-the-audience sort of post in a long while, but I normally try to make him at least do something interesting that he can be bothered about. Are these harder to tag than I'm imagining them to be?

anonymous May 16 2011, 08:39:18 UTC

see, that makes a bit more sense! and i understand what you mean about school. i know it's been kicking my ass lately too, hahah.

i think most of your posts up to this point have been pretty open, but i think some people might just intimidated at the prospect of trying to hold a one sided conversation in a way that doesn't seem forced. i know i'm always afraid my replies are boring or i'm not giving enough to work with, ahaaa. ;;;