Missing Scenes

[perteltote]

Title: Missing Scenes
Chapter:  The Tavern
Author: Perteltote
Characters/Pairings: Allan, Guy/Marian
Genre: um...cracky drama? Kind of like the actual show?
Rating: R
Word Count: 3,638
Summary:  Marian decides she needs Allan's help for a project. They run into Guy while they are there.  Awesomeness ensues.

Comments

[thymelady]

Dammit, woman, you're such a tease! You're worse than me! >;-D

Hehehe "Allan doesn't want to be the one to corrupt Marian". Hm? Oh, come on Allan...

Delicious! Could very easily be continued! *whistles innocently* There is no greater delight than a horny, confused Gisborne... ;-)

[thymelady]

PS: It would be lovely if you posted a link over at lordgisborne too. 8-)

[perteltote]

;D

[onemorelurker1]

This is great, Allan is very in character.

"If he stops them now, Guy will kill him. If he doesn't stop them, Marian will kill him once she's sober. Not to mention whatever Robin will do to him once he finds out. "
So true.

I wonder how much does Marian remember and what will she do when memories of feelings return to hunt her...ahem..sequel..ahem ;)

[perteltote]

Yeah, I love writing from Allan's POV. For one thing, he's hilarious, and for another, I like G/M from the outside and he's the only one around to see them.

I probably should have titled this "The Unchronicled Adventures of Allan A'Dale and his sidekick G/M" but that was too long. And I might write sequels from someone else's POV sometime, I guess.

[robinfanatic]

"...there were so many of them, they had been digging a tunnel." He explains, "They did I good job, I hated to..." abruptly he stops,

Nice to see a little remorse from Guy, even if he's had a bit much to drink.

In the show I always picture proper little Marian... I have a hard time picturing her this drunk and keep thinking she'd be more likely to beat Guy over the head rather than let herself be all aroused!! But, that said - great little fic!! Yes, a sequel would be a good thing!

Love your Allan in this! Great job!

[perteltote]

Well...the expressed goal at the beginning of the process was to write a G/M fic, so I couldn't really let her beat the crap out of him, could I? I would have loved to do Allan's POV on one of their fights though. Maybe next time...

I know, I know about Marian getting sloshed!! Definitely OOC :)At least she left before...you know.

But I don't think Marian is proper at all...she is like barely contained by the concept of 'lady'. She can appear to be one sometimes, but I think she is totally constricted and rebellious and she channels that into fighting and being the NWM. Even without all the secret identity stuff, she is way too opinionated and stubborn to be considered proper, IMO.

[thymelady]

But I don't think Marian is proper at all...she is like barely contained by the concept of 'lady'. She can appear to be one sometimes, but I think she is totally constricted and rebellious and she channels that into fighting and being the NWM. Even without all the secret identity stuff, she is way too opinionated and stubborn to be considered proper, IMO.

Agree. And copying Guy's sideburns is just so hilariously cute! X-D

[robinfanatic]

oh I don't disagree with that she is outspoken & stubborn for the 12th century - but she still observes proper lady-like appearances when she must even though she is boiling beneath the surface, and as you note channels that through her NWM activities.

[01cheers]

This is a fresh and funny twist - and for once, I find Marian's cross-dressing quite endearing!

[perteltote]

aww, she's so cute copying Guy's sideburns. What's not to love?