Puppy Love 6/50 - Bath Tub

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Title: Puppy Love 6/50 - Bath Tub
Pairings: Spander
Appropriate Ratings: NC17 overall but this chapter... R-ish
Warnings: Slavery, nudity, lotta the same from the previous chapter. Nothing much. Xander is underage! (he's 16, almost seventeen) (Set between seasons 2-3)
Disclaimers: Not my characters. I make no money off this, I'm just playing. I

Comments

Puppy Love 6/50 - Bath Tub

[slashpuppy]

I just found this series and I'm enjoying it immensely. I'm looking forward to finding out what Xander's choice will be!

Wee fix:
There's an extraneous beta comment I think:
what room? Maybe describe the room before using it as a comparison? Or have I missed where you described it?

Re: Puppy Love 6/50 - Bath Tub

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It's fixed now... honest >.<

I forgot about that line, so silly.

Thanks for reading, commenting, and letting me know my mistakes!

And in all honesty? I'm looking forward to his decision too. Stubborn git hasn't given it to me yet!

[hawk_soaring]

Love, love, *love* this... but you've got some beta comments in there that should be edited. :)

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I did it, I did it, oi I'mma doofus. *twitch* Catch anything else like that, never fear to let me know. I'd rather be told and fix it than not know and have the story ruined, so no worries about my getting angry and going all crazy on you. I appreciate the concrits, honestly!

And now that I'm done my babbling *laughs*

So glad you're enjoying it. I really think this came out so much better than the previous version, and now the next chapter flows so much easier.

Thanks for everything!

A Barking Good Time!

[jasbrico]

Yay! New chapter goodness! I love the idea of a plot chart and I'm so looking forward to more glimpses into this universe.
I'm just wondering if there's going to be more puppy play and whether Spike will be able to get Xander to relax enough to get into a puppy head space?

Re: A Barking Good Time!

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Take a look at the chart, it's the only real hints I give towards where the fic is going *winks*. I LOVE the chart thing too! First time I've ever done it and it really helped me structure a story from start to end. I write a brief synopsis of what I'd like to show up under each heading, shuffled them around till they fell into a workable order, and tadah! Fic! It's almost like it's writing itself, I just gotta put the meat on the bones.

Thanks for commenting and reading! I hope you enjoy where the muse takes this.

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That's pretty much it. Spike's trying to teach his pet he still has the power to make decisions, just that each decision he makes has a specific outcome that cannot be avoided.

I'm itching to figure out if he submits or fights or even something else, I'll be ecstatic when my muse finally spills the beans.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

[mistress_tien]

This is just so wrong. So, juicy, wonderfully wrong.

Thanks so much for sharing.

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Hee, glad you're enjoying! Thanks for the comment!