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Dec 11, 2006 23:24

Title: The Smutty Interlude (11/?)
Author: Me. a.k.a. mugglerock
Warning(s): Something that resembles angst smut.
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: H/D
Category: Domestidrabble with a touch of angst and silliness smut.
Disclaimer: Why, yes! I do happen to own Harry Potter. I also own Disneyland, the Marlboro cigarette company, Playboy, and Big Ben. *relents* Not mine ( Read more... )

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kitsune_okashi December 12 2006, 07:43:28 UTC

Wow! Steamy and simmering.

pervy_slash_kid December 12 2006, 15:34:09 UTC

:"> Thank you!

smoo_001 December 12 2006, 08:13:39 UTC

nicely done.

pervy_slash_kid December 12 2006, 15:34:22 UTC

Thank you very much!

free_the_goats December 12 2006, 08:13:45 UTC

Holy shit they're fucking and caught!!

pervy_slash_kid December 12 2006, 15:35:36 UTC

Hah. Not quite. You'll see the angst I have in store for them. Oh, Buddah. You are all going to hate me.

;D

nico1908 December 12 2006, 12:57:02 UTC

I have enjoyed this series so far, I'll continue reading it, and I really don't mean to be mean - but I think it shows that you hate to write porn. Just MHO.

pervy_slash_kid December 12 2006, 15:37:29 UTC

Hah! Nice. At least someone was honest. And even on my birthday! ;D

I know it shows. I have no problem reading it, but I just can't write it. I giggle at words like, "cock" and then lose track of where I was going.

nico1908 December 12 2006, 17:04:24 UTC

Happy Birthday!!!!

My suggestion would be to get a beta who is experienced and comfortable with writing sex and give them free reign to edit away.

pervy_slash_kid December 12 2006, 17:08:38 UTC

Thank you!

And that's a good idea, but I have this thing about altering content. I don't intend on writing too much smut in the future anyway. I like to stick to what I am capable of writing.

nussyslove December 12 2006, 13:43:24 UTC

I think you did wonderfully on the porn! I have seen plenty worse and for someone that usually does not write or enjoy the porn I think you did an increadible job! Keep up the great work.

pervy_slash_kid December 12 2006, 15:38:17 UTC

:"> Wow, thank you so much! Good to know not all of you feel like above commenter! Heh.

<3<3<3<3

nico1908 December 12 2006, 17:35:14 UTC

Yes, there is much worse out there. That doesn't mean this chapter couldn't be better.

pervy_slash_kid December 12 2006, 17:52:58 UTC

Love, I appreciate your honesty, I truly do, but there's no need to berate other people's thoughts of my work.

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