The Trade Chapter 4 (and a question)

[pervyunitwins]

Title: The Trade (Chapter 4)
Author: Black Silk
Pairing: H/D
Rating: Hard R
Warning(s): Unbetated!  Boy on boy smex.
Word count: 1,707
Disclaimer: Characters are the property of JK Rowling. I only put them in situations she would not; and if she did she would not dare publish them.
Author's note: This took slightly over a week to post.  Sorry I was aiming

Comments

[enchanted_jae]

Wow! Harry is all commanding and rowr!

Thanks for the entry!

[pervyunitwins]

I like a commanding Harry!

I am sorry I did not post a comment with the link on your journal. I had been planning to write more than on entry, but my essays happened!

Thanks for the comment!

[avana96]

Oh wow! I do love this series! ;)
Can't wait for the next one!
And strawberries! Yummie ^^

About the cum vs come question; I don't know why but to me cum sounds a bit weird. Maybe it's because English isn't my native language and in Dutch the word for come also has those two meanings. So, it more familiar I guess. Hope, I made myself clear ;)

[pervyunitwins]

Thanks for the comment. I think the reason I used strawberries was because I had eaten some that day.

I will try to write an update before the year is done!

[spicykittins]

when a man orgasms he will cum but you invite someone to come over to your house...unless someone is making a pun so you did it right
Very good story I quite like it a lot :D

[pervyunitwins]

Thank you for your comment and your clarification. I should be old enough to know and should have read enough fic to have a clear view of which to use, but alas, I am hopeless at times.

I will try to write another chapter of this story before the new year! So I have five days!