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Jul 07, 2010 01:04

Okay, summertime. First year at Middlebury, done. Working at walmart for about a week now (a little over). Okay, caught up ( Read more... )

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hey_its_me July 14 2010, 02:25:13 UTC
I am glad you don't use commas with "because" anymore...but there is one case in which you use it.

Don't use it: I like cats because they're awesome.
Do use it: I like cats, because that's how I roll. (Notice how "because" is used to mean "as" more in this instance. Also, notice how flipping the sentence doesn't work as well: Because they're awesome, I like cats. (<--Works.) Because that's how I roll, I like cats. (<--Doesn't really work.))

I like your post. It made me smile. If you feel like writing prose, you should write a book with me sometime!! *grin* I think we would both have interesting ways of approaching it, and it'd be a nice challenge.

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