BLAKE WEEK TWELVE: For you...

[petetucker]

Farewell from this graduating student.

For you...

Is it sad to leave a place
After dwelling there so long?
Wiping a tear from my face
Writing my last song

Meeting faces that became friends
I got to know their smiles
Images that never end
Not even for a while

Finding pieces of their pasts
Some pieces that were hidden
Deep within each of their hearts
But entry

Comments

too deep

[fadia]

brilliant poem pete. It just shows that you have been touched by this Blake fellow in the right places (kinky?) but I still disagree about Bromion, I still think his parents are to blame and society is even more to blame for his actions!!!! Keep writing in LJ pete, you have great insights!!!!!!!!!

[kath_85]

Old Pete, tops poem! Ditto to all that you wrote!

[petetucker]

thanks young kath.

[danielleyoung]

Oh god (sheds a tear) I'm not going to cry!! I'm not going to cry!

You are so cute pete!!! I agree!

[clarebear_g]

Are you graduating already?...(and of course as the others said..good poem!)
:)

[michaelgriffith]

Thanks Pete... you ARE a poet... for all occasions... I sure hope you let your talent grow and grow and grow...
MG