LJ Idol- Week 2: "Follow Me"

[peteyplane]

    Gia cowered in the corner, ears held flat against her head, making herself look as small as possible. The rest of the mice had fled in all directions as soon as the human’s boots had come stomping into the room, but Gia stayed out of sight. She knew well enough by now that the humans only came down here to remove barrels, crates, or bags. They

Comments

[leni_ba]

I love this! Gives a whole new twist to 'rats abandoning a sinking ship', doesn't it? I can just picture them getting organized for a mass evacuation. heheh. tks!

[peteyplane]

Thank you!

[sinnamongirl]

Such a cute take on emigrating, well done!

[peteyplane]

Thanks! (I hope it didn't go too far over the edge and become "cutesy")

[xo_kizzy_xo]

Oh, this is adorable! Now I want to find out where Rooney's taking her and who Lily is (my first thought was a cat but something tells me that's not true.)

[peteyplane]

Thank you!! I'm hoping to write more eventually, though I guess it probably won't be for LJ Idol, so I'm really glad you liked it. (Also, your instincts are correct; Lily is not a cat, though there are a couple in the story. )

[bleodswean]

Great storytelling! I'm scared for Gia but hopeful, too! Ellis Island!

[peteyplane]

Thank you!! I keep procrastinating horribly and having to submit first drafts, so I'm super glad the overall story came through well for you in spite of that. I'm hopeful for Gia, too c:

[tonithegreat]

Awwww! This is a nice different take on the prompts and an enjoyable read! I'll be glad to see these guys again if you write them again.

[peteyplane]

Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it, and I hope to write more of them someday in the future, though it may be afar off. I'm definitely glad it was enjoyable since I was scrambling to get it done hahah.