Ficlet: Promises

Aug 10, 2009 20:05

Ficlet: Promises
Author: petite_stars
Spoilers: ITLOD, Entity
Category: Gen, Sam and Jack friendship
Summary: Jack makes a promise
Disclaimer: Not mine! Never will be and I made no money.

Promises )

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drewandian August 10 2009, 16:14:13 UTC
great look at their friendship....nice story!

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petite_stars August 11 2009, 09:28:00 UTC
Thanks !

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annerbhp August 10 2009, 16:27:03 UTC
Really good look a their early friendship and bond as soldiers. And, of course, all I can think as I read this was "Oh, Jack. This is going to come back and bite you in the ass." I love early Jack and Sam.

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petite_stars August 11 2009, 09:29:20 UTC
Thanks! Early Sam and Jack is just made of awesome :) You still have the friendship, and the UST but without all the deeper, darker angsty stuff between them thats in the later seasons.

And it does indeed come back to bite Jack in the ass!

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amilyn August 10 2009, 17:17:42 UTC
Nicely done. I like the hesitation and tension you've paired with Carter's absolute determination and certainty.

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petite_stars August 11 2009, 09:29:34 UTC
Thank you :)

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draco_somnians August 10 2009, 20:29:24 UTC
*sniffles*

Excellent ep tag! For both eps! Really fills in that gap nicely and is a wonderful look and Sam and Jack's professional relationship (even though I see ship, but I'm squinting really hard *g*).

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petite_stars August 11 2009, 09:30:36 UTC
(hugs)

Thanks!! haha, you find ship in everything!

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draco_somnians August 11 2009, 18:11:44 UTC
I do, yes. Lol. I find it extremely difficult to read anything as purely gen. I don't possess "gen goggles". Lol.

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beyond_wonder August 11 2009, 01:08:35 UTC
Awesome work!

I haven't read a stargate fic in a while and you reminded me why I love fanfic. Such a touching scene and something that
I could picture happening in the show.

My favorite line was: The bonds between soldiers in combat were more solid than most marriages -- such a powerful sentence!

Thanks for the read chicky and hope to read more from you! :D

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petite_stars August 11 2009, 09:30:56 UTC
Glad you liked it :)

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