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petite_stars

Fic: Solitary

Dec 12, 2009 17:57

Title: Solitary ( Read more... )

sam, fanfic, gen

Comments 15

ziparumpazoo December 12 2009, 19:19:46 UTC

Yay, you posted it!
I really like the new beginning, it really pulls you right into the story. Nicely done :)

petite_stars December 12 2009, 23:40:23 UTC

All thanks to you hon :)

Thanks again for your assistance! You were right about the beginning and the reordering of the first scenes, very glad I did it!

((hugs))

2_fish December 16 2009, 17:45:08 UTC

wow...well written!! :)

petite_stars December 17 2009, 10:35:33 UTC

Thank you :)

scifithinker January 13 2010, 14:44:28 UTC

Ouch. That was painful to read. You obviously did something right. :-)