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Fic: The Case of the Golden Goose

Sep 02, 2006 19:58

Title: The Case of the Golden Goose
Author: Petriepuss
Pairing: Holmes/Watson
Rating: R
Warnings: Slash
Author notes: Part of the Blackcat series. English is not my first language; will greatly appreciate any tips for better writing. A short smutty piece as a break from a longer one I am working on. Thank you very much to my most wonderful beta: ( Read more... )

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Comments 23

titc September 2 2006, 13:21:19 UTC

Very nice ;-)

petriepuss September 2 2006, 16:02:42 UTC

Thank you!

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petriepuss September 2 2006, 16:05:21 UTC

R...eally? *blush*
This is the fastest fic I ever write, only took me one afternoon (I am an extremely slow writer). Thank you for reading it!

watergal September 2 2006, 14:09:38 UTC

Hehe! I really liked the serendipitous discovery though the situation. Very original.

petriepuss September 2 2006, 16:11:01 UTC

Thanks! You spot the bunny! That was the idea behind this fic. I was reading a document unside-down one day, and thought ...code, and then thought in what situation will Holmes be reading the paper unside-down....

pandapony September 3 2006, 02:05:42 UTC

Sweet! I especially like the passionate kiss at the end. Holmes is such a tease. Thank you!

petriepuss September 3 2006, 02:12:03 UTC

Thank you for your encouragement, you are one of my favourite author *fangirl* !

mackiedockie September 3 2006, 18:30:17 UTC

A very nice vignette! I enjoyed the balance between the characters. Watson's patience and subtle control dovetails very well with Holmes' obsessions. It is good to see a Watson with a strong determination to press his point *g*. And Holmes is clearly allowing himself one more important obsession in Watson.

petriepuss September 4 2006, 01:39:14 UTC

I have always seen Watson as the one in this pairing that processes the stronger inner strength and confidence. Any weaker man will not be able to live with Sherlock Holmes not to mention being his closest friend for so long.
Thanks for your comment!

lelah_angel September 5 2006, 06:27:38 UTC

Especially when it comes to all those situations when Holmes hmm… not quite disparaged Watson’s intellect. Years of that could do horrible things to one’s self-confidence. Loved your story and awaiting the longer one.

petriepuss September 5 2006, 08:36:13 UTC

Watson is a highly qualified professional, and quietly confident in his own ability. That is why he can brush off Holmes' comment about his intellect and not becomes defensive about it.
Thank you for your comment, glad you enjoyed it.