FIC - Lily of the Hollow Changing Seasons fic for lunalovepotter

[pettybureaucrat]

And here is the final section.

Written for lunalovepotter for r-becca's Changing Seasons.

Comments

[lunalovepotter]

Rather than comment on all three parts, I figured I'd save some space and comment at the end. That was a lot of fun, and very creative. I especially enjoyed the playful interaction between Harry and Ginny. I love how they just can't keep their hands off each other, like they're randy teenagers!

Like you I think that Lily is underused in fan fiction. She's one of my favorites, so I was pleased to see her character showcased here as well. Thanks for writing this! :)

[flyingcarpet]

Very cute. You did a great job bringing in all the supporting epilogue characters. :) I'm so glad you were able to join in the fest!

One thing I would suggest, though, is including a link at the end of part 1 to part 2 and so on -- it might make it simpler for easily-confused readers like myself. :)

[pettybureaucrat]

Thanks for the nice comments. I'm still kind of fumbling with all the technical details of LJ, but I'll remember from now on.

[eimajunknown]

that was fun. i like the way you developed all these extra characters and added some of your own.

[pettybureaucrat]

Thanks for the kind words. I'm probably going to write more about Lily and her friends. So much attention has been focused on Rose and Scorpius, or Albus and Scorpius, that Lily seems to have been shunted aside.