FF: Something More (Ten/Donna - NC-17) 3/3

Dec 03, 2010 19:45

Notes and disclaimers in Part One

Previously in Part Two

Despite his best intentions, he can’t help the low moan of pleasure the escapes his lips when she hits a particularly sensitive spot. He winces inwardly, but Donna shows no sign of having noticed, continuing to rub and knead and dig in with her thumbs, releasing the tension at the base of ( Read more... )

ten, angst, donna noble, doctor who, romance, post-episode, ten/donna, nc-17, fic

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missdoctordonna December 3 2010, 20:16:10 UTC
GUH! I have to go... lie down now.

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caz963 December 3 2010, 20:30:44 UTC
Then my work here is done. Glad you enjoyed it ;-)

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juliet316 December 3 2010, 21:31:03 UTC
Did it suddenly get very warm in here or what not?

Very nice, sweet ending BTW.

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caz963 December 3 2010, 21:35:40 UTC
Heh - I hope so *g*

I always like writing a nice, post-coital chat; and I'm glad you enjoyed it - thanks for reading.

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canterlevi December 3 2010, 21:49:49 UTC
OMG, do people really have sex like this in real life? Man, I'm missing out if they do.

This is the point where I feel like I should smoke a cigarette. If I smoked.

Haaaaaaaah...

Hooray, Secksytiems!

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caz963 December 3 2010, 22:20:44 UTC
Hey - at least I didn't have 'em doing it while swinging from chandeliers or hanging out of the TARDIS!

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canterlevi December 4 2010, 00:23:58 UTC
Uh, did I type that out loud?

You mean people do it from the chandeliers, too?

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hooloovoo_42 December 3 2010, 22:16:13 UTC
Blimey! I think the entire UK has just warmed up by about 20 degrees!!!

“Oh, now you’re just showing off,” he smirks at her. “I must be rubbing off on you.”

Donna has never been one to resist a dirty joke if there’s one to be had, and that, combined with her need to find something normal in this situation makes her shoot back - “I think it was me that did most of the rubbing!

*snigger*

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caz963 December 3 2010, 22:22:50 UTC
Well that's alright then - I wanna go out tomorrow so the roads'll be nice and clear!

And well... I'm not one to resist a dirty joke either, am I?

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kgriess December 3 2010, 22:23:09 UTC
Woah. Why did I decide to read this last part while still at work? I think I need to go home now! HA!

I liked all the talking afterwards...very cute and a nice way to wrap it up.

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caz963 December 3 2010, 22:29:55 UTC
Um - oops?

I have a penchant for writing 'my' couples chatting in bed, either before (like in Not Complicated) or after, like here. I suppose it's because I like couples that talk a lot and snark each other anyway, so it just fits naturally.

Anyway, thank you for reading and letting me know you enjoyed it.

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