FF: Rewriting the Script (Ten/Donna - PG)

Jan 30, 2011 18:17

Disclaimers: Not mine. Auntie’s. Although if David Tennant wants to come round to argue the point, I’d have no objections!

Characters: Tenth Doctor, Donna Noble (Ten/Donna)

Rating: PG

Category: Humour, fluff, romance

Spoilers: Set post- S4. Please apply your fixit of choice!

Written for time_converges in the 2010 Secret Santa fication at doctor_donna and originally ( Read more... )

ten, pg, humour, donna noble, doctor who, romance, ten/donna, post-series, fluff, fic

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time_converges January 30 2011, 23:05:03 UTC
I think you know already how much I adore this, but I wanted to thank you personally again. You did so much with this prompt, and it's just gorgeous in every way. It is so "them" to try to go on a date after they're already a couple.

Wonderful, brilliant, and perfect. Thank you so much for this.

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caz963 January 30 2011, 23:46:53 UTC
Aw, you're welcome. I thought I was being a bit sneaky in making it a date when they're already together - I hoped you wouldn't mind, but it was the way it worked for me!

I don't normally do "adventure" fics, but this was fun :-)

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time_converges January 30 2011, 23:48:50 UTC
I didn't mind at all, it fits perfectly! It seriously makes me grin just thinking about it, and it's memoried forever.

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bas_math_girl January 31 2011, 04:04:30 UTC
This was delicious in all sorts of ways!

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caz963 January 31 2011, 21:31:02 UTC
Glad you enjoyed - thanks!

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adriana_divolpe February 1 2011, 01:14:33 UTC
I really like this story; it's so enjoyable to read. :D As usual you've got them spot-on, and all the elements mesh really nicely: the humour and the action bits and the fluffy romance. I think my favourite part is the discussion they have while he's trying to fix the wiring. “Oh, you’re kidding me. There really is a Planet Zog?” *g*!

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caz963 February 1 2011, 20:01:43 UTC
That was the first bit I wrote. In a show like DW, there's never time for in depth conversations - that all has to happen while you're saving the world!

I'm glad you liked it - you know how difficult I find writing D/D romance (which is stupid because I ship them like mad!) so I'm pleased it worked.

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heintz57 February 1 2011, 03:44:32 UTC
Oh how I like a good story and this is a good one.

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caz963 February 1 2011, 19:54:38 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it - thanks for reading :-)

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beachy_geek February 1 2011, 04:20:37 UTC
Their voices and mannerisms were perfect, I felt like I was watching an episode in my head! I think this begs for more, I'd love to read a series.

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caz963 February 1 2011, 19:53:16 UTC
Thank you!

As for a series - if I get any more ideas (or somebody prods me!), I'll do my best to come up with more. I love writing them, but I'm crap at the ideas bit :(

They'd be like Nick and Nora Charles in space :-)

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