My Stardust Melody, Chapter 5

[petuniagirl]

            Hearing his name on Reid's lips resonated in Luke's ears as he walked away, sending tiny chills up his spine.  The sound of it on Reid's tongue make Luke think about, well it made him think about Reid's tongue.  And all the places it could be on Luke's body.  Luke couldn't believe the way he responded to Reid-he was almost (but not

Comments

[kccalgal]

Reid is such a bumbling body of nerves while watching Luke, but when he talks with him he is Joe Cool. Luke has definitely inherited Damian's smooth talking ability with the way that he handled the Senator, but around Reid he is attacked by mush mouth syndrome. They definitely are a matched pair.

I can't wait to see what happens in the garden. Great chapter.

[petuniagirl]

I'm so glad you saw all that--I find it so difficult to write why they're so right for each other, so I really appreciate the comment.

[casaluna85]

Great chapter! Can't wait to find out what happens next!

[petuniagirl]

Thank you!

[petuniagirl]

I always love your comments. Let's see... Julian certainly isn't a great guy, but you'll have to wait and see how it all plays out. "Rescuing" may not be what's precisely needed as it turns out.
I just posted the next chapter--I'm so sorry it's taken me this long to respond. Thank you (even if it's a bit belated--darn holidays are wreaking havoc on my writing and reading time).

[joann414]

This sure is a long party. LOL. Ms. Impatient here, but now they are going back outside, and I think you are really fixing to heat things up. ( hint, hint ). Great chapter once again

[petuniagirl]

LOL, agreed. I think you'll see something you like in the next chapter, which I just posted.

Thank you!

[sleeper6]

I LOVE Reid getting all nervous around Luke--only Luke can get to him like that. :D

And I like the connection they're building here but I'm scared Julian is going to notice them.

Fantastic chapter.

[petuniagirl]

Thank you. Julian, whenever he shows up, will definitely have an impact.