My Stardust Melody, Chapter 18

[petuniagirl]

               "Hey, could one of you get my bag from the backseat of my truck?  I've got some stuff in there we could use.  Soap, toothpaste, some clothes," Luke expounded as he gingerly lowered himself to the ground.  His left ankle was throbbing, and he wasn't looking forward to the walk to the cabin.

Without a word, Nathan

Comments

[sleeper6]

Ha ha, oh, this is brilliant. So entertaining. I just love the way you set this up and Nathan is a hoot. Glad he can figure out how much the guys do want each other even if they don't. And Reid getting jealous enough to carry Luke--swooning so hard right now.

Sad bit at the end with them trying to pretend that one night didn't mean anything BUT I have hope they'll figure out the truth themselves soon and FINALLY give in. The sexual tension is off the charts, btw.

Awesome chapter, truly.

[petuniagirl]

Thank you. Nathan has the unusual position of being the only person who hasn't heard a ton of bad stuff about one of the guys--it's a good thing Reid isn't into sharing. So Nathan might be the only person to see both guys clearly.

I couldn't resist Reid carrying luke. There was a cabin and Luke was injured: it just had to happen somehow. Speaking of things that just have to happen, the UST has got to lead to something, right? It will just be a matter of how much truth needs to come out so the tension can explode.

Thank you for your thoughtful comments again!

[petuniagirl]

Thanks Darine. Luke and Reid could really use some alone time, couldn't they?

[petuniagirl]

You're so sweet-- like parfait. (Now I need to get a parfait.)

Thanks!

[lurelei]

A truce? A truce!?! *chews on the word* Okay, that might work, but what we really want is... (You see how I'm totally ignoring the last part? Because he is like him, he is, he is!!!)

[petuniagirl]

Yes, I see your game, lol.

But fear not, I think Luke is going to start relating more and more to Reid while they're in this cabin. All setbacks are temporary.

[hilja83]

Cant waith for Luke and Reid to be alone, I hope they finaly will talk to each other and clear the air.

Great chapter!!

[petuniagirl]

Thank you! I'm looking forward to getting them alone, too.