My Stardust Melody, Chapter 21

Jul 09, 2012 06:20


                Reid was lying on his back staring up at the creamy white ceiling and clutching a pillow as he tried to tame his emotions.  He hated that Luke made him feel so vulnerable.  In the space of five minutes, he had gone from annoyed to enthralled to aroused to enraged.  No matter how hard Reid had tried to distance himself from Luke, ( Read more... )

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scotianova July 9 2012, 21:52:31 UTC
I really love the chapter and am excited to read more about their night together.

:) Left a 'message' on LRO

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petuniagirl July 11 2012, 20:10:07 UTC
Thank you, and I still love that puppy picture!

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petuniagirl July 11 2012, 20:21:55 UTC
As a matter of fact, I think you may have told me a time or two that Luke's pretty great here, lol.

I'm so glad I didn't throw out the Jaws line; I think I literally cut it and then pasted it back in to see if you thought it was out of place.

I'm so glad you're enjoying this. And you already know how freaking grateful I am for all your help! But, if not, I'll say it again: Thank you!

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sylnl July 10 2012, 05:51:43 UTC
Oooooooooooooooo yessssssssssssss. The men in one room... one bed.... and sort of dealing with the past.... Great read! I loved the Jaws thing. I totally felt Reid in this chapter. Sooooooooo happy with this update and of course looking forward to more! Thanks xxx

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petuniagirl July 11 2012, 20:11:26 UTC
Thank you! I hope you're enjoying your vacation!

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sylnl July 16 2012, 10:10:21 UTC
I am! Thanks! Perfect time to dot the i's. I've made some important choices. It's a good vacation:-)

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lurelei July 10 2012, 07:30:55 UTC
'It was like Reid’s feelings were blood in the water and Luke was fucking Jaws.'

Oh yeah, this force of nature, looking like a cute puppy and this vulnerable man, snarky and hurt so much by the people closest to him - not only together in one room, but also in one bed, hopefully taking a chance to speak up and speak out.

'It was the siren's song all over again.' Yes, yes it is :)

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petuniagirl July 11 2012, 20:12:45 UTC
Thank you so much for commenting! Things are looking a little more promising for the guys.

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moerlin July 10 2012, 15:42:52 UTC
Oh, I love this chapter! So much progress, yet so many things still only known to one of them. Looking forward to Nathan's absence. ;)

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petuniagirl July 11 2012, 20:14:56 UTC
Thank you! Yeah, it's baby steps when it comes to the truth coming out, but we're headed in the right direction. I think Nathan leaves after the next chapter, so the guys will be alone soon. ;)

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