Big Boys Don't Cry, Unless Their Whole Lives Are Crashing Down Around Them [standalone]

[pfor]

            Patrick smiled, “It’s nice . . . to be able to talk to everyone again.” He took a drink from the water bottle sitting right behind him on the bar, “I feel like I’m back in the loop.”

“You were never out of it, ‘Trick. Most of us were just scared for you, I know I was.”

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Comments

[stepps]

pfor, if/when you read my recent post to my journal, I totally don't mean you! OMG, I intend to read this and will probably love it, and I hadn't gotten very far into my flist today before posting said post about teen angst writers and their cliche fic titles using lyrics! I dont mean you! :( Your title is good! Ok, gonna go before I get myself worked up.

[pfor]

Oh, that's okay! I understand. Those get on my nerves all the time, so I know where you were coming from.

I usually just name my fics after whatever songs I listened to writing them xD I'm highly uncreative and indecisive my self when I'm coming up with titles.

[larbd]

HOLY CRAP. :O

That was amazing.

I spent an entire day of just listening to that song and had actually thought of giving a story based around it, a try but wow. Im not even going to try anymore. Nothing can top this. This has really been one of the most wonderful fics I've read in a long long time. Absolutely amazing.

*saves to memories, plays song and reads again and again*

[pfor]

Oh, that made me happy! Thanks so much.

I know if I read a fic based on a song that I was planning to do a fic based on I get discouraged whether or not the fic was any good. But, I mean, hey, I'm not gonna stop you if you change your mind. It's a great song and deserves a lot of attention despite being by a usually less-than-great artist.

[raewellins]

That was beautiful. I love that song, and it fit so well with this piece, although I never thought of the song that way!

I'm so glad how everything turned out, and I love the way you wrote this.

It was an amazing piece.

[dustyxsp]

oh my god, i loved that.

i seriously cannot imagine not being able to hear patricks voice. i would die!

a world without tricks voice is like a world without sunlight...

then again, i hate sunlight, so bad metaphor...but its the thought that counts right?

i soo love this story...=)

i LUV YOU

[anonymous]

iv read most of your stuff and you haven't let me down yet you are so great at writing i wish i could write like you but sadly~tear~ i can't you are awesome write moer PLZ!