from over the water

Aug 01, 2011 13:46

This was initially going to be a blow-by-blow description of an illustrated series. However, it turned into something a little more functionally descriptive, if written in the present tense (which I clearly lack a real feel for).

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Phaedri stands on the beach, letting the surf wash over her feet and watching the midday summer light dance on the ( Read more... )

a draft, a chunk

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nefasus August 3 2011, 17:21:51 UTC
I'd very much like to hear a bit about Ollies' parents.

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phaedri August 3 2011, 17:28:13 UTC
Her origin is a rather significant plot element. ;)

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