I know right? I keep thinking of his cute little face and just feel how naive he was back then. He looks about 14. Anyway. Next chapter will propel us forward in time, when Jonny's grown up a bit, so no more painful naivety. :P
Thanks a lot! I didn't use to be very fond of it either, but I figured what the heck, let's give it a try. It's very easy-going to write. I'm glad it's not annoying you, lol.
Comments 4
Though I can't help but feel oddly sorry for that naive, little, skinny kid. He's so blindly trusting it's almost painful.
Normally I'm not really that fond of 2nd person, it kinda annoys me, but I think you make it work very well.
This wasn't very contructive but what the hell :)
Reply
Thanks a lot! I didn't use to be very fond of it either, but I figured what the heck, let's give it a try. It's very easy-going to write. I'm glad it's not annoying you, lol.
Np! Thanks for commenting! :)
Reply
What a great beginning.
(reposted in writing journal, sry :P)
Reply
...eh. Eh. *runs off to write chapter 2?* ;)
Thanks love. <3
Reply
Leave a comment