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Feb 18, 2009 23:48

Title: Girly boys
Author: Las
Pairings: Dan/Jonny, Dan/OC
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Dan and his first gay kiss.

Author’s notes: I wanted to write KH slash, I asked unifiedxdivide what I should write, and what she requested was Dan’s first gay kiss. So I wrote this in a couple of hours. Here you go, sweets. <3 ( Read more... )

fiction, kill hannah rps

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unifiedxdivide February 18 2009, 23:02:52 UTC
AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!! FOR ME!!!>????

You win! That was SO CUTE. And hot. And omg Dan. Thank you thank you thank you!!!

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phaelas February 18 2009, 23:12:13 UTC
YES FOR YOUUUUUUUUU!!! CUS I LUF U N WANNA CHEER U UP! ;D

You're welcome! <3

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imjustdifrent February 19 2009, 17:43:22 UTC
fdjsklghusnvrfdsaf

That's what happens
when I read your work.
<333

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phaelas February 19 2009, 18:01:23 UTC
Awwwww that's great! Thank you! <333

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x_carnivale_x February 19 2009, 17:44:39 UTC
Dude, I love Jon's characterization in this. So coy and yet so sweet. Snarky, but lovable. Especially that last line of his, great.

This was a really great piece, and I especially love the juxtaposition of past and present.

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phaelas February 19 2009, 18:01:00 UTC
Haha I had the exact same thoughts with this fic! I want to keep Jonny omg. I never planned any specific characterisation for him but he turned out all cute and naughty. I want to write more fic with this Jonny, haha.

I'm glad it worked out after all. :) I've tried it before and I think it worked better in that particular fic, but apparently this isn't all bad either. Thank you for the comment!!

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lethal_kitteh February 19 2009, 23:12:33 UTC
UUUUUuuuuUUUuuuu! ^___^
This was so good, I totally wasn't expecting the ending! :D
Brilliant and sweet!

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phaelas February 20 2009, 08:53:56 UTC
Hahaha which didn't you expect - the kiss with Jonny or the non-kiss with Jessie? I love writing unexpected endings, whee. lol.

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

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lethal_kitteh February 20 2009, 20:37:08 UTC
The non-kiss with Jessie, I was like:
"Dan shared his first gay kiss with JONNY?! Wooohooo!"
So good :)

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phaelas February 21 2009, 23:13:01 UTC
I saw it as a nice anti-climax in that part of the story. XD But yeah, it totally had to be Jonny.

Wanna bet those two are shagging like bunnies now. Hmmm.

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killhannahx3 February 24 2009, 03:55:16 UTC
I like the kind of random character you threw in there. Sometimes we just get sick of reading JON, MAT, DAN, GREG, y'know?

(Okay, not really, but you understand what I mean, right?)

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phaelas February 24 2009, 09:10:27 UTC
Yeah I totally know what you mean, lol. It's the one downside to this fandom - the lack of characters. In my previous fandom (the Finn fandom) there were at least 20 characters to choose from who all live in the same town and are friends or at least acquintances. Playground was so much bigger!

I'm trying to think of new plotbunnies in the KH fandom but somehow they're all jsut variations of the same... =x

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killhannahx3 February 26 2009, 00:45:23 UTC
Yeah, luckily I can't get enough of these boys, though(:

And I totally get what you mean... lately, it's just been not being able to complete anything. Like, I'll get a great idea, but... I just sort of give up on it/get bored because I can't make it happen like I imagined it to.

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phaelas February 26 2009, 08:31:25 UTC
Well that's true enough for me as well, haha.

I have that all the time! We should add each other on some messenger and inspire each other or something. ;)

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