"Leave out all the rest" 3/?

[phalanges_d]

Fandom: Brenda/Sharon
Rating: R
Spoilers: hmm.. well, since its all in my head, non really, but i guess it makes sence if you think its set after the christmas episodes
Disclaimers: haha yes, I own Sharon, and Brenda, TNT and oh wait, reality just kicked in- telling me no, that was me daydreaming...
Summary: Sometimes things just happen and when they

Comments

[wildwildwood]

Ohmygod!

There is ENTIRELY TOO MUCH TO LOVE in this chapter! If I listed it all, it would basically be a re-post of it! It was hysterically funny, Mel is such a great character [and I really think between her existence in both of our fics as Raydor's ex, she should just be deemed canon by TPTB :D] and I loved how Sharon just swoops in Fairy Godmother style to rescue Brenda from her own closet!

Ps - "I thought the purpose was to get people to talk with us to get information about the murders, not try and sell them bibles or get them to join you at Sunday school." made me ROFL so hard!

[phalanges_d]

First: WHAT?! Is THAT where Mel came from?!?! (I got home late last night from work, but decided to write down the next chapter before going to bed. And I was sitting there and Mel came. And I just thought, who? I've never used that name before. Now that I'm going back to read your previous chapter about Mel to see if I've made your Mel some justice. SEE what your fic does to my mind? My subconcious can't seem to stop thinking about it!
Second: If you're willing to share her, I promise you she'll have fun=) [and if you dont, cause I honestly couldn't remember her name was mel, I can rename her if you want- but I kinda liked where you were going with 'deemed cannon' :P]

Third: THANK YOU!! :D I really [really!] appreciate it! Since I have no ide what I'm really doing here, making you laugh is juuust where I was heading;)

[wildwildwood]

Listen, Mel get's around - that's what makes her so awesome! LoL - by all means, go forth and use Mel, especially if keeps revealing more of Sharon's personality and will help Brenda a) stop dressing like a Sunday School Church Lady ['I'm a laaaady'] b) start flirting with Sharon!

[phalanges_d]

Hee! Alright! Its a deal- Both Sharon, Mel and I will do our very best to convince Brenda to take advantage of Sharon's closet- [all in due time ofcourse! ;)] as for the rest- I really think you'll like Mel... *g*

[madampresident]

YAY! So funny, I laugh the whole way through your chapters! (though I must admit I was semi-distracted at the thought of Sharon Raydor in a see-through t-shirt....)

It's totally believable that Mel wouldn't think "Sharon and this woman are just work acquaintances and maybe I shouldn't talk about her teenaged sexual escapades?" like, she'd assume they were close. It's totally real. Also, I think each and every one of us has that friend we love to death but just NEVER SHUTS UP. lol!

Great chapter, keep it up!

[phalanges_d]

Ahhh! Awesome! Someone out there shares my humor:P yay!
(Don't hold your breath for later. There might be other things that'll distract you.. *g*)

"It's totally real. Also, I think each and every one of us has that friend we love to death but just NEVER SHUTS UP."

I know right?! And when you TRY to express the uncomfortable situation you'll get in later with your eyes to make em shut it; they just never seem to get it. hee!

Thank you so much! I'll get on it when a certain boss lets me have an actual day off! ;)

[major_roon]

I have to second i_heart_cuddy - I too was distracted by that see-through shirt. OMG!

Now I can't wait to see how the operation will go and in what trouble Brenda will get them because, let's face it, this is doomed to fail one way or another :P

[phalanges_d]

Wiii!! Alright! I think its safe to say that the see-through shirt will have to make a strong comeback;)

Now where's the faith in Brenda? (Just kidding, of course she'll screw it up! :P) Next chap is on its way shortly! thank you for hanging in there!